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what g rap verse is fukking with this verse in terms of multi's

The harsh realities of life is takin tolls
Even Jesus Christ forsake my soul
Please tell me what price to pay to make it home
Take control, I'm makin dough, but not enough to blow
J.O.'s, they lust my flows, but aiyyo, I don't trust a soul
That's all I know or need to, these evil streets'll meet you
halfway and eat you, I laugh tryin to survive illegal
I leave you lost, bounce you on the cross, rip you like a horse
Sacrife your life to a higher force
Then I stomp your corpse it's the Bronx of course recognize the accent?
One of the last livin still in action, general assassin
Catchin any wreck, blastin any tech
Smashin any chest, passin any test, Charles Manson in the flesh
Any last requests before you meet your maker?
Sew what you reap a wake up, shakin up a storm like Anita Baker
I'll take you straight to hell and fill your heart with hate
Incarcerate your fate in Satan's fiery lake, then I lock the gate
Make no mistake, "The shyt is Real" as Joe, we follow the killer's code
When we come for you, tell me where will you go?
Nowhere to run, hide, I'll find you and and silence your screams
And even if you kill me I'll still be in your fukkin dreams
 
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what g rap verse is fukking with this verse in terms of multi's

The harsh realities of life is takin tolls
Even Jesus Christ forsake my soul
Please tell me what price to pay to make it home
Take control, I'm makin dough, but not enough to blow
J.O.'s, they lust my flows, but aiyyo, I don't trust a soul
That's all I know or need to, these evil streets'll meet you
halfway and eat you, I laugh tryin to survive illegal
I leave you lost, bounce you on the cross, rip you like a horse
Sacrife your life to a higher force
Then I stomp your corpse it's the Bronx of course recognize the accent?
One of the last livin still in action, general assassin
Catchin any wreck, blastin any tech
Smashin any chest, passin any test, Charles Manson in the flesh
Any last requests before you meet your maker?
Sew what you reap a wake up, shakin up a storm like Anita Baker
I'll take you straight to hell and fill your heart with hate
Incarcerate your fate in Satan's fiery lake, then I lock the gate
Make no mistake, "The shyt is Real" as Joe, we follow the killer's code
When we come for you, tell me where will you go?
Nowhere to run, hide, I'll find you and and silence your screams
And even if you kill me I'll still be in your fukkin dreams

Pun had great multis but G Rap did it before him and betetr IMO
 

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noooo way.... Pun had 1 classic album

G Rap had classic amongst classics

again im not takin anything away from Pun but NOBODY is seeing G Rap

nah family u a good poster so i respect your opinion

but pun would rap circles around g rap

now granted pun is a student of g rap and and he took
his multisyllable rhyme pattern style and ran with it

but there is more to pun then multi's

he had ill inner patterns punchlines metaphors and wordplay and a ill flow

g rap flow not rhymes is very limited
 

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This nikka change his rhyming king every other day :snoop:
 

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From the top of the key, the 3 Villain
Been on in the game as long as you can wheelie your Schwinn
Turnthecorner spinnin, bust that ass and get up
Dust off the mask, whoever laugh give him a head up
He got jumped, it pumped his adrenaline
He said it made him tougher than a bump of raw medicine
To write all night long, the hourglass is still slow
Flow from Hellborn to Free Power like Wilco
And still owe bills, pay dues forever
Slay dudes when it comes to who's more cleverer
Used to wear a leather goose ski with a fur collar
Hand charged a fee for loose leaf words for dollar
Ya heard? Holla - broad or dude, we leave food
Eat your team for sure, the streets sure seem rude
For fam like the Partridges, pardon me for the mix-up
Battle for Atari cartridges or put your kicks up
It's a stick up
 

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Don't try and act dumb, there goes that news van again
Act like you knew like Toucan Sam an' 'em
He eat rappers like part of a complete breakfast
They rhymes ain't worth the weight of they cheap necklace
String 'em up, bring 'em up under whack junk snack
And get that out your hand, punk, jump and get your dunk smacked
foul, we all know the rules bro
You slow, you blow the super you fools is on Boss like Hugo
 

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Yuck, is they rhymers or strippin’ males?
Outta work jerks since they shut down Chippendales
They chippin’ nails, doom, tippin’ scales
Let alone the pre-orders that's counted off shippin’ sales
This one goes out to all my peoples skippin’ bail,
Dippin’ jail's, whippin’ tail and sippin’ ale


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