ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

[the rhyme king]

You didnt even break down any rhyme schemes

outside of u sunzoo fresh aig me akademik and there are a few others im forgetting nobody knows rhyme schemes on here they think dudes like us are nerds and they don't give a fukk about the technical aspects of rhyming.

unless u want to go verse for verse bolding the rhyme schemes and giving a in dpeth analysis on why such and such is better then im up fro it

 

[the rhyme king]

I wouldnt of mentioned that.

@intilectual recipricol hates nas.

i know he hates nas

but intilectual recipricol loves me im like his favorite poster on here so he will gloss over that.

 

[the rhyme king]

for the record i don't think lupe could mess with elzhi lyrically in terms of rhyming vocab metaphors wordplay punchlines etc and if anybody wants to debate this we can.........

but i warn know what u are talking about though or im gonna chew u up about it.

 

[Auger]

have to go with eL

 

[Big Mel]

Ace of Sapdes

 

[Motife43]

I come through, geared fresher
Flow's tighter than clothes in a queer dresser
We'll have you leap from a pier, we'll call it peer pressure
You've been hoaxed tell your kinfolks
I give beats heart attacks, pen strokes, lead poison pencils
Turn anthems to lullabies and lobotomize instrumentals
You traumatized so you stop, tears stalling
Is it wrong I
Make the song cry to get the top tier falling
Doughboys say I'm swagged to death
I'm bad ass to the white kids bagging meth
I spit fire you just got the dragon breath
Your ex off the rag an F
Luckily I had a Magnum left
I pointed right where her thong at
And knocked it loose and like Dr. Seuss
I gave the cat the long hat
Shift the bed with this gift instead
Ill as pointing an infared at an infant head
That's a bad look
Like on the nights when your dad cook
Wishing he had took, culinary courses with a grad book
fukk your sorry flows and your sad hook
I'm still glad that you mad shook


After hearing that verse my face looked like I had 4 strokes

 

[Mindfield333]

outside of u sunzoo fresh aig me akademik and there are a few others im forgetting nobody knows rhyme schemes on here they think dudes like us are nerds and they don't give a fukk about the technical aspects of rhyming.

unless u want to go verse for verse bolding the rhyme schemes and giving a in dpeth analysis on why such and such is better then im up fro it

Lupe's song "failure" had more depth than any Elzhi song.

Lupe Fiasco – Failure Lyrics | Rap Genius

 

[the rhyme king]

Lupe's song "failure" had more depth than any Elzhi song.

Lupe Fiasco – Failure Lyrics | Rap Genius

breh this is not going indepth breh this is just posting a verse and saying it's better without no explanation.

 

[the rhyme king]

I come through, geared fresher
Flow's tighter than clothes in a queer dresser
We'll have you leap from a pier, we'll call it peer pressure
You've been hoaxed tell your kinfolks
I give beats heart attacks, pen strokes, lead poison pencils
Turn anthems to lullabies and lobotomize instrumentals
You traumatized so you stop, tears stalling
Is it wrong I
Make the song cry to get the top tier falling
Doughboys say I'm swagged to death
I'm bad ass to the white kids bagging meth
I spit fire you just got the dragon breath
Your ex off the rag an F
Luckily I had a Magnum left
I pointed right where her thong at
And knocked it loose and like Dr. Seuss
I gave the cat the long hat
Shift the bed with this gift instead
Ill as pointing an infared at an infant head
That's a bad look
Like on the nights when your dad cook
Wishing he had took, culinary courses with a grad book
fukk your sorry flows and your sad hook
I'm still glad that you mad shook


After hearing that verse my face looked like I had 4 strokes

all see the compound rhyming elzhi takes the craft seriously.

 

[Mindfield333]

breh this is not going indepth breh this is just posting a verse and saying it's better without no explanation.

well change your post to "Elzhi spits better multis than Lupe" and i'd agree with you... Hell, you could even say Earl Sweatshirt.
But lyrical ability is more than some "multis"

 

[Motife43]

I said it another thread, I can only listen to so much El because it gets monotonous after a while. But, it's a few songs by him that just leave me astounded. That Colors (Remix) from DJ Spinna's album, his verse on "Hiding Place," all of Elmatic, this joint called "My nikka" off of Dela's (French producer) Changes of Atmosphere album. The man can rap circles around most these nikkas

 

[Big Mel]

The colors remix is better than anything Lupe has, can or will ever do.

 

[the rhyme king]

well change your post to "Elzhi spits better multis than Lupe" and i'd agree with you... Hell, you could even say Earl Sweatshirt.
But lyrical ability is more than some "multis"

breh i did'nt mention nothing about no multis i said rhyme schemes

u know and i know lupe is not dope in the rhyme pattern department

yes multis are apart of multis but what about the actual rhyming like can he put syllables together is the pattern of the rhyme is dope is rhyming in the different parts of the bar

is the vocab dope is he rhyming more then one syllable etc


and also breh what were the metaphors in that verse ? what were the punchlines in that verse etc

u got to do more then just post a verse and say that is better without no basis why u think that

im not saying u got to be art barr or some shyt and post a long ass esay but at the same time u got to give me more then it's better in your opinion.

 

[the rhyme king]

I said it another thread, I can only listen to so much El because it gets monotonous after a while. But, it's a few songs by him that just leave me astounded. That Colors (Remix) from DJ Spinna's album, his verse on "Hiding Place," all of Elmatic, this joint called "My nikka" off of Dela's (French producer) Changes of Atmosphere album. The man can rap circles around most these nikkas

lyrically he is this generation nas imo

 

[JuvenileHell]

but intilectual recipricol loves me im like his favorite poster on here so he will gloss over that.