ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

[IronFist]

both are dope

 

[Eddie Jordan]

GZA and it's not even close in my opinion

 

[ucanthandlethetruth]

black thought my nikka but he aint fukkin wit gza on no level breh

 

[the rhyme king]

 

[intilectual recipricol]

"instead of fakin like you care get the bed shakin in bed naked you so twisted think yo legs breakin, you said take it..."

Pac was flowin his ass off though

 

[mrken12]

He was amazing in this one too:

 

[the rhyme king]

"instead of fakin like you care get the bed shakin in bed naked you so twisted think yo legs breakin, you said take it..."

Pac was flowin his ass off though

i honestly think and this is my opinion

i think pac would hear the beat and hum the melody of the beat in his head flow to the beat like that i just learned this technique tonight i think that he is the best at that i think pac wrote to the beat and not without the beat if u understand what im saying.

what u think


The key is to find a good rhyme pattern you can keep up for a few lines, and once u have this, figure out the basic tempo of ur flow, the number of beats...juss humming a da-da-da-da-da will work to do this, juss hum the beat you want in ur voice, and incorporate the rhyme schemes in as such...If you have beats, write to those...It truly does help, trust me haha...



Internal rhyming and multies are all about flow...If you do multies properly, they carry the same flow...Like a musical tap, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2...etc., etc....It's like u figure out what tempo n rhythm u want this multie to have...So all the multies u drop that rhyme with the one u've chosen are spat with the same tempo n rhythm...by rhyme you've chosen, I mean say u decided to use the rhyme grabbin ya mind with slappin ya eyes and slash ya wit knives...You figure out a set tempo and rhythm for the multies, and while the flow n all of the rest will alter, grabbin ya mind, slappin ya eyes and slash ya wit knives will all share the same tempo and rhythm...Of course this tempo n rhythm will switch as the rhyme pattern switches, needless to say...

 

[the rhyme king]

He was amazing in this one too:

no disrespect but this is not the og




this is better

 

[88m3]

I like the part where he rhymes hennessy, enemies.

That's a AA rhyme scheme right?

 

[the rhyme king]

[Verse 2 - 2Pac]
Been getting word that these square motherfukkers with nerves
Saying they can get with us, but picture me getting served
My own mama say I'm thugged out
My shyt be bumping out the record store
As if it was a drug house
My lyrics bang like a Crip or Blood
nikka what! It ain't nothing but a party when we thug
And there I was, a young nikka with heart
Ain't had shyt to loose, pullin' my pistol on them fools

 

[SteelCitySoldier]

Pac is my GOAT but dude...he got smoked, big homie got killed and in the openeing two bars he talking shyt about muthafukas saying "they got nerves talikng about him getting served"...and less than a year later...HE GOT SERVED. Damn shame it sounds like a corny ass movie but...it's the truth.com

 

[the rhyme king]

 

[the rhyme king]

im going hope to see u dudes there

 

[Homeboy Runny-Ray]

nikkas never quote the outlaws on hit em up you know why? cause they verses are trash

fatal had the best verse.

and ive heard other rappers quote those verses.

 

[Slystallion]

I always skip the outlaws