ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

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im not a sage franics fan but he can rhyme his ass off.

THat track is nutty. He rhymes the last 3 syllables AT LEAST for 3 separate verses, and in the middle of some of the bars, he occasionally tosses in 5-6 rhyming syllables. The song is thematically consistent too.
 

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[Verse 1]
Yo I'm hot like 95 Fahrenheit
On a summer night, tight spot where bodies rot
Rats drink from water drops, in the streets nikkaz
Little kids scared cops, wit red dots
Philosophical gangsta, where violent priors
Goin back like black and white TV's wit pliers
Leanin on broke down cars, wit flat tires
Flash iron, on anybody tryin on the blocks I'm supplyin on
Mighty call, my peeps, tie ballons up
And swallow 'em and the penal got goons, lots of 'em
Cops see them and run, don't want no drama
Certain parts of the streets, the beast don't want a part of
Mortar,
hood haunted like the Dakota
Where John Lennon was shot up, but he sang for peace
He begged for freedom, hanged wit wild Jamicians
From Kingston, who drink Irish Moss
Listenin to Peter Winston, Machintosh
Lightning hits the top of the church steeple
When I'm writin, semi-automatic no hyphen
It's frightening.... [scratches]

nas verse off of thief's theme
 
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yeah that is ridiculous he can make sense also while rhyming.

I was thinking about something the other day. Since you have Tupac quoted in your sig: Not many other rappers use alliteration like he did. FOr example.

They say p*ssy and paper is poetry power and pistols
Plotting on murderin motherfukkers 'fore they get you
Picturing pitiful punk nikkas copping pleas
Puffing weed as I position myself to clock G's

More lyricists need to use alliteration. It adds impact.
 

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I was thinking about something the other day. Since you have Tupac quoted in your sig: Not many other rappers use alliteration like he did. FOr example.

They say p*ssy and paper is poetry power and pistols
Plotting on murderin motherfukkers 'fore they get you
Picturing pitiful punk nikkas copping pleas
Puffing weed as I position myself to clock G's

More lyricists need to use alliteration. It adds impact.

not alot of people had sick rhyme schemes like this example u posted


They say p*ssy and paper is poetry power and pistols
Plotting on murderin motherfukkers 'fore they get you
Picturing pitiful punk nikkas copping pleas

Puffing weed as I position myself to clock G's
 

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Yeah and he added all the "P's" on top of it.

They say p*ssy and paper is poetry power and pistols
Plotting on murderin motherfukkers 'fore they get you
Picturing pitiful punk nikkas copping pleas
Puffing weed as I position myself to clock G's



That's why it cracks me up with people say Tupac wasn't a top 5 MC. He was a poetic genius.

exactly if u know about rhyme schemes and such u know that he did'nt use the aaaa or abab rhyme scheme he up there with the nas rakim and them imo.
 
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