ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

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i sold my soul to the devil and the price was cheap
ayo it's cold on this level but it's twice as deep
 

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Why do you bold entire lines and stuff that doesn't actually rhyme with anything?

This is how I would bold personally

My dogs is dogs, with official bloodlines
I say "Stop Being Greedy," get a plate if you want mine
Why
do nikkas always force you take it back to the streets?
Can I at least go one year without spittin the heat?
Motherfukkers think it's sweet until you get yo' chest messed up
Two days later he's dressed up -- let him rest up
He ain't goin nowhere, no time soon
Remember "High Noon"? Last thing he heard was BOOM!
Can I get some room or do I gots to, make me a path?
Break you in half -- fake nikkas make me laugh
Y'all nikkas is funny, still talkin bout money
And ain't got none -- get the shotgun cause you hungry
 
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i refuse to conform
I'm rated "R"...this is a warning, ya better void,
Poets are paranoid, DJ's D-stroyed,
Cuz I came back to attack others in spite-
Strike like lightnin', It's quite frightenin'!
But don't be afraid in the dark, in a park,
Not a scream or a cry, or a bark, more like a spark;
Ya tremble like a alcoholic, muscles tighten up,
What's that, lighten up! You see a sight but,
Suddenly you feel like your in a horror flick,
You grab your heart then wish for tomorrow quick!
Music's the clue, when I come your warned,
Apocolypse Now, when I'm done, ya gone!
Haven't you ever heard of a MC-murderer?
This is the death penalty,and I'm servin' a
death wish, so come on, step to this
hysterical idea for a lyrical professionist!
Friday the thirteenth, walking down Elm Street,
you come in my realm ya get beat!
This is off limits, so your visions are blurry,
All ya see is the meters at a volume,
pumping Lyrics of Fury!
 
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I'm not certain why you bolded certain parts.

Care to break down the rhyme scheme in this song?

 
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