Essential Official post your piff for critique/comments/stunting thread
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Urbanmiracle
Brooklyn the planet...
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
Got this going on right now.
Has 2 chops of a Beatles acapella mixed in.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
sick percussion man. Feelin this. Kinda has a Tribe Quest vibe. Even a bit of Large Pro i hear in there. Dope!
2010
verse starts at 1:33
2011
MP3 Twit - Twitter music, mp3s, tweet songs skip to 1:47 for my verse
2012
Gizza Mayne - Lights Down
2014
throwaway tracc
2015
new mixtape on the way
never been called wacc online/streets just told "get a real studio or master your songs"
discuss away
verse starts at 1:33
2011
MP3 Twit - Twitter music, mp3s, tweet songs skip to 1:47 for my verse
2012
Gizza Mayne - Lights Down
2014
throwaway tracc
2015
new mixtape on the way
never been called wacc online/streets just told "get a real studio or master your songs"
discuss away
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
Looking to spice this up, but the rough draft turned out pretty good so far. Critique would be welcomed, or if anyone wants to jump on it hmu
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
bro this is crazy! the acapella is nice. this is some yoshi heaven stage level shyt right here. i think you've got a really unique sound. this one is very happy and open. it's not my style, but you executed very well. would like to have heard an analogue solo instrument tho, like a guitar doing something. but that's where i would have taken it
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
I really wish the Bass was brought up like +3 db.. my ears were so ready for the thickness. maybe thats the style you're going for, but i think you have enough head room for it. i also think if you dropped that part around 1:38/the outro, but took that and replaced some of the choppiness in the middle of that track, it would be literally a gas fire, it would be too much hot flames lol, it would be a nice break before jumping back in, like coming up for air, then submersing your audiobody back into the beat.
Propaganda
Superstar
i think this was a good start...had me nodding my head. "the intro" (before the all the drums come in) took a bit too long. although i guess with the right rapper/artist it could work...the vocals could carry it. it's just that like half the beat you posted was a build-up to the whole thing.
other than that, maybe some drop-outs or filtering work...a little more bass and a little less sample in terms of volume. hell, maybe just cutting the low-end of the sample will open up your bassline.
Propaganda
Superstar
it's a cool, short loop...but then it repeats for 3+ minutes with no variation whatsoever.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
thanks breh, personally don't feel like adding a guitar though.
It already has 2 guitars in it.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
this is really sick but i kinda miss an Hi-Hat to go along with it.
It still feels kinda empty that way.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
dat tape hiss
sort of an interlude track. i just dig how the drums jab and even though theyre kind of annoying, it's part of the charm. i don't love it or hate it... it's like respect lol. I dunno, it gets my head nodding, but nothing special.
sort of an interlude track. i just dig how the drums jab and even though theyre kind of annoying, it's part of the charm. i don't love it or hate it... it's like respect lol. I dunno, it gets my head nodding, but nothing special.
so much piff in dis bytch! Hip hop/rap is the blacc man's music(not ery'one can flow/produce 
)one of y'all had a 2 min soul beat had my 1 yr old dancing when she took my iPhone yesterday