Very nice joint
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Very nice joint
Professor K.
rap game Paul Millsap
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Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
Tried a new technique/workflow on this. Appreciate some feedback, didt want to make another thread.
@TEKBEATZ @doublenegative @KushSkywalker @LauderdaleBoss @clanarchy @Zeu$
You gotta work on song structure. Beat kinda got a repetitive vibe to it as well and sounds like it should flow a lil smoother too. The beat comes off choppy.
That instruments you using are good, it's just that I think you need to arrange things better.
Keep grinding though breh. You'll get it.
You gotta work on song structure. Beat kinda got a repetitive vibe to it as well and sounds like it should flow a lil smoother too. The beat comes off choppy.
That instruments you using are good, it's just that I think you need to arrange things better.
Keep grinding though breh. You'll get it.
I got to agree with this, I think the sounds and intention you got are there, it's just making the arrangements right. Well theres no right or wrong, I'm shyt at explaining things but it sounds kind of chaotic like each element doesn't know it's place, if that makes sense. Start out with a less is more approach and keep your drum pattern simple. With the elements you have chosen for this beat, you can turn this into a dope one. Just keep at it.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
What do you guys think about this???
I want a rapper on it. Anybody that can hook me up with a creative MC?
I want a rapper on it. Anybody that can hook me up with a creative MC?
Beat is dope on some real soulful shyt. I'd rock to it if you want. Just pm me the link.
You should hop in the sample challenges too.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
Beat is dope on some real soulful shyt. I'd rock to it if you want. Just pm me the link.
You should hop in the sample challenges too.
Thanks, appreciate hearing that!
I already have doublenegative rockin to it but i personally would love to see a collab on this track!!!
You 2 might go back and forward on this track. I mean each verse consist of 2 parts if you listen good.
the first part of consists of 8 bars and than there's 12 more bars after it. Than the hook comes in and it's repeated that way through out the song.
Here's the wav-file for it:
https://www.sendspace.com/file/kkf0vv
Aight no doubt. I'm always down to collab. He can do his part first and I can come in afterwards an fill in the spots if you wanna rock it like that. It's all good.
Thanks
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
Can i hear some of your rhymes?
This is from a sample that I had @clanarchy flip a while back.
This is a trap joint with @DBR
Storytelling joint with @TEKBEATZ
3 different types of songs from 3 of the best producers on here.
My actual mixtapes are in my sig.
DJ Mart-Kos
All Star
sounds pretty dope man. unique voice i think