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Reminds me of my smoking days

This is dope, it felt like a Hook section all the way through with that piercing synth. I think you have a good track on your hands. If you take out that singing synth for 8-16 bars and then bring it in later on, even if you left it like it is, it would be great for commercials. If you restructured it it would definitely work for a song.
 

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What's good I'm back with another track brehs. Now this one might be a little controversial. I am getting at cacs but only racist cacs who push white supremacy so if you are white do not take it personal. It's more than just about getting at cacs tho to be clear. The message of the track is dope just give it a listen if you get the oppurtunity. Thank you.
-Vik

 

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What's good I'm back with another track brehs. Now this one might be a little controversial. I am getting at cacs but only racist cacs who push white supremacy so if you are white do not take it personal. It's more than just about getting at cacs tho to be clear. The message of the track is dope just give it a listen if you get the oppurtunity. Thank you.
-Vik


this is dope as hell breh...got to check out more of your work...the bolded had me over here :heh:
 

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What's good I'm back with another track brehs. Now this one might be a little controversial. I am getting at cacs but only racist cacs who push white supremacy so if you are white do not take it personal. It's more than just about getting at cacs tho to be clear. The message of the track is dope just give it a listen if you get the oppurtunity. Thank you.
-Vik


This has some knock to it. Nice flow as well.
 

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