roxxthe96er
Emcee
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roxxthe96er
Emcee
Any feedback welcome
Reebok Jones
Pro
Yo.
Not really the normal typa shyt that gets posted here but, I laid the verse on the 2nd half of my friends track. Peep...
Not really the normal typa shyt that gets posted here but, I laid the verse on the 2nd half of my friends track. Peep...
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Reebok Jones
Pro
fukked with the 1st half of the hook but felt like the autotune part could be done better. First verse was dope, nice flows and rhymes, the flow felt a little stumbly at a point or two but overall I liked it. And I also liked the juxtaposition with the other rapper, at first I was thinking he was sounding like a Future ripoff but he went hard in the 2nd half I can't lie.
It's a pretty aight track but I would just keep workin at more stuff in this direction and polish all the small kinks.
Reebok Jones
Pro
Where's that sample in the intro from? Sounds really familiar
Liked the hook, got me in the groove. Your voice is definitely mixed way toooo loud but you're going hard. Giving me heeeeavy Mick Jenkins vibes.
I think on a fundamental level you got everything you need. On a creative level it's pretty much there, but I want you to be your own sound more than reminding me of other rappers sounds as much. I would recommend rapping about more specific shyt going on in your life. Something that only you can speak on, that might be the only thing I need!
Typing all this while listening thru... I really like this track bro. Followed you on Soundcloud. Keep doing it.
Let me know if you need beats too, I'm @Reebok Jones on SC
roxxthe96er
Emcee
Bless for the actual feedback instead of "it was good". We all tryin to find our own sounds n figure out how they mix together best, much more to come
Reebok Jones
Pro
Good shyt, listen to my track above if you could, I had the feature on the 2nd half
roxxthe96er
Emcee
I'll peep when I'm back to the crib my g
roxxthe96er
Emcee
shyt is tight for sure, the lyrics n flow are on point, only thing I would suggest is you really find your own sound, whether it comes from how you say it or how you mix it jus do something to stand out n be unique you feel me?
kevlar kohleone
Pro
tell me what u think
Yooo!
Idk if a few of yall know me from the Battle Zone (i guess u can say I’m the resident Coli Battle rapper...my last big opponent was Xcel from team homi) but I also do music and am about to drop my latest project Friday with my producer King Carlow (done beats for Joey Badass, Pro era, cj fly, etc). Its called “Daze In The O” and below are 3 tracks ive dropped from the tape so far. I welcome any and all feedback
Idk if a few of yall know me from the Battle Zone (i guess u can say I’m the resident Coli Battle rapper...my last big opponent was Xcel from team homi) but I also do music and am about to drop my latest project Friday with my producer King Carlow (done beats for Joey Badass, Pro era, cj fly, etc). Its called “Daze In The O” and below are 3 tracks ive dropped from the tape so far. I welcome any and all feedback
