Did my 1st club/dance type song feedback would b helpful
beat is okay composition wise but it's missing something. maybe even just a quick chord change in the backchords right before another repetition... that hook reminds me of something I might hear on a Clipse album...
The sounds you chose for the instrumentation are pretty corny. These are a very important part of any song, arguably the most or 2nd most important, so make sure you have good synths and samples to compose with.
Your recording is pretty bad... and by that I mean the actual recorded take you chose to put on the song. I can't hear your verse at all, it sounds like you're trying not to wake up your mom. The chorus sounds somewhat interesting like I said with Clipse but idk it seems really weird and could probably get grating. It almost sounds off-key but I can't tell, and I feel like you intentionally gave it that abstract sound that it has, so I get that but it may need some tweaking.
I'm just trying to be 100% with you here breh, I'm not really feeling this at all. But you said it's your first beat so there's a lot of improvement you could still make. I tried to be as specific as possible just so you know some stuff to work on next time, sorry if it comes across as harsh. To be honest if you record with a good take it might already fix a couple of the other problems I mentioned. Just keep working at it