Dope I like how I can't really tell what's going on but at the same time I have guess-timates of what type of backround this story has. Not in a cookie cutter type of way though but recognizing that this hasn't really been done before.
I fx with this lol I'll spread it how ever I can on social media.my breh with the dreads though no bs I had a discussion about how dreads are antenna before, if you've ever had them there's always that one that sticks up in the air before they get heavy and long
Already got tons of back story to cover just off the intro too. I want to know what's next which is always good. You doing the whole production dolo though? Definantly not easy. Respect the craft. One thing that is like a slight problem though is that I can't go from page 13 to 14 for some reason without manually typing it in the address bar. Not sure how big an issue that is but might as well tell you. I'm mobile though so maybe it's that. It brings me to the home page if I click the arrows or if I click choose page. Only at the 13-14 interval though. No pop ups though is definantly a plus. Can't stand that bs on other manga sites.
So I wasn't the only one who was confused. Unlike the Breh here, the feeling of confusion was not pleasant.
The drawing and colors look good.
I'm wondering: why Manga style? Why not traditional comic book style? Maybe I'm just an ugly American but I never picked up a Manga before. It creates a barrier for me.
Thanks for the review and you make some good points. Yea its just me breh, writing, drawing everything. Thats why it took so damn long lol.
Anyway I fixed the pages so hopefully everything works fine now. That feedback was crucial.
This was real dope breh I like the whole story set up for things to come. I liked the guy with the dreads he has a cool design. The main character looks like he's about to get himself in some shyt. Definitely will check for future chapters and try to spread the word. I wish you luck breh.
I'm thinking about reposting on Narutoforums, is that ok with you threadstarter?
So I wasn't the only one who was confused. Unlike the Breh here, the feeling of confusion was not pleasant.
The drawing and colors look good.
I'm wondering: why Manga style? Why not traditional comic book style? Maybe I'm just an ugly American but I never picked up a Manga before. It creates a barrier for me.