My last 2 videos haven’t really performed that well why do u think that is?

[kevlar kohleone]

I would say it's the production. I like the bars and flow but not a fan of the beats. Keep doing ya thing tho breh.

Appreciate u taking the time 2 listen & giving ur candid critique

 

[7th Letter Specialist]

You need more B-Roll. I didn’t see a concept in the videos. All I saw was you going to a fly/grimey place and rapping there. Show you walking to the place or something.

Put some ppl in the video or something. Let us see you hanging out w/ ya patnas or something. You talking to a girl, or something that you actually exist irl. Even if you got them all chillin in the background while you rapping.

I’d also use more color, play with lighting a little more.

And probably pick production that may be more upbeat, and not so much boom bap

 

[KnickstapeCity]

Breh responds like chick's posting pics on reddit trying to get you to go to there onlyfans


If I was you gf what would you do?

 

[maxamusa]

OP let me ask you... why do you make music?

 

[maxamusa]

@kevlar kohleone nah, real talk. Make an OnlyFans. I’d be more interested in that content than them rhymes, breh.

tell a man you want to see his OF brehs

 

[kevlar kohleone]

You need more B-Roll. I didn’t see a concept in the videos. All I saw was you going to a fly/grimey place and rapping there. Show you walking to the place or something.

Put some ppl in the video or something. Let us see you hanging out w/ ya patnas or something. You talking to a girl, or something that you actually exist irl. Even if you got them all chillin in the background while you rapping.

I’d also use more color, play with lighting a little more.

And probably pick production that may be more upbeat, and not so much boom bap

Will take into consideration moving forward

 

[kevlar kohleone]

OP let me ask you... why do you make music?

2 tell my story which is therapeutic & also shed light on my town & state which is extremely overlooked

 

[maxamusa]

2 tell my story which is therapeutic & also shed light on my town & state which is extremely overlooked

So why do you feel like these "under performed" ?

 

[KnickstapeCity]

tell a man you want to see his OF brehs

 

[kevlar kohleone]

So why do you feel like these "under performed" ?

I just feel like they should’ve performed better especially the one with the castle just my personal belief based on how I delivered alone

 

[maxamusa]

I just feel like they should’ve performed better especially the one with the castle just my personal belief based on how I delivered alone

let me clarify; what is your definition of "perform"

 

[kevlar kohleone]

let me clarify; what is your definition of "perform"

200 views & 9 likes in 30days ain’t a good performance

 

[kevlar kohleone]

let me clarify; what is your definition of "perform"

But let me ask u this if u had 2 categorize my style of rapping where would u place me? & once you’ve answered that then tell me who do u think I rap better than in that category. Now once you’ve answered that tell why there’s such a difference in the numbers

 

[maxamusa]

But let me ask u this if u had 2 categorize my style of rapping where would u place me? & once you’ve answered that then tell me who do u think I rap better than in that category. Now once you’ve answered that tell why there’s such a difference in the numbers

If you stand on what you say as far as your purpose of making music is; than views should not matter.



If you want views and thats what you're trying to accomplish there is a different strategy that needs to be implemented.

 

[kevlar kohleone]

If you stand on what you say as far as your purpose of making music is; than views should not matter.



If you want views and thats what you're trying to accomplish there is a different strategy that needs to be implemented.

It’s not about the views but I think if the talent is there the views should be evidence of that