lloyd banks has some of the most intricate rhyme schemes ever

[Capitol]

fraud bytch made p*ssy king. Someone needs to confiscate your computer

 

[jevity]

Everytime you do one of these, you always make numerous mistakes.
I think you should put more time into your attempts at
deconstructing your favorite verses.
Also, if you want to make this really interesting,
and perhaps then avoid recieving some of all the backlash you get,
you should create a more inclusive template for you findings.
It would provide for a more engaging read,
if you learned how to "colour-code" the different categories
of entries in your analysis. I'm primarily thinking about variations,
such as, internal rhymes,slanted rhymes,alliteration,
the usage of vowel sounds, transistions etc.

I think it is great that you devote yourself to your hobby
in such a dedicated manner, and learning about rhyming words
and stylistic tools in creative writing is never a negative.

Lastly, I hope that you will take heed to my advice
and that your future productions will contain
a consistent implementation of the aforementioned suggestions.

Best Regards

Hip hop

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[JayBaldacci]

but i thought banks was all hype? lol

 

[Lurker]

son i know more then anybody on here when it comes to basic ass rhyme patterns metaphors wordplay punchlines etc.

fixed

 

[Lavish]

Im convinced that this rhyme king fagg!t is a robot. smmfh

 

[CapFromMCU]

, i just saw homie's other thread about banks being wack, its on the same page as this thread,