Lets keep it real im the best rapper/producer combo on the coli

[b_low_brown]

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[b_low_brown]

@DarianaGrande might have me tho

 

[Jhoon]

@DarianaGrande might have me tho

Negg train?

 

[b_low_brown]

Negg train?

If you could help get me to -4000 thatd be lit

 

[JOHN.KOOL]

Rapping wise your not horrible I'll give you that. There's worse rappers making money, your verse didn't seem like it had a direction tho, you seemed to just be rapping going off the topic of a girl with no real prior plan on what to achieve on the verse. The panties, 23 Jordan scoring line was your punch on this which was OK, you kinda ruined it with too many words.

'Laid her panties on my Jordan's, she 23 and I'm scoring' sounds a lot better than ''laid her panties on my Jordan's, its funny cause she 23 and I feel like I'm scoring' You telegraphed the punchline too much with the extra words.

Production wise your also not horrible, I won't call your trash and that's amazing for me. The beginning of the beat sounded better than when it actually dropped tho.

 

[b_low_brown]

Rapping wise your not horrible I'll give you that. There's worse rappers making money, your verse didn't seem like it had a direction tho, you seemed to just be rapping going off the topic of a girl with no real prior plan on what to achieve on the verse. The panties, 23 Jordan scoring line was your punch on this which was OK, you kinda ruined it with too many words.

'Laid her panties on my Jordan's, she 23 and I'm scoring' sounds a lot better than ''laid her panties on my Jordan's, its funny cause she 23 and I feel like I'm scoring' You telegraphed the punchline too much with the extra words.

Production wise your also not horrible, I won't call your trash and that's amazing for me. The beginning of the beat sounded better than when it actually dropped tho.

Genuinely appreciate the feedback bro! We didnt really have a song concept yet but now we locked down a legit hook and i know how im gonna tweak it. Ill definitely tag you when the final drops. Thank you for real.

 

[b_low_brown]

B Low - 7pm in SD
@JOHN.KOOL when i do shyt like this does it hurt not having a hook?

 

[DOSDUMUNI]

I got u beat OP

Rapped on these





Produced this

 

[JOHN.KOOL]

B Low - 7pm in SD
@JOHN.KOOL when i do shyt like this does it hurt not having a hook?

Not necessarily no. I think whether or not a hook is needed depends mostly on what the beat sounds like, and the beat you used here works well for a track with no hook, it doesn't really hurt the track quality wise. Why I say 'necessarily' and 'really' tho is because I think you should have closed this out with a hook of sorts, your plan for the beat was fine but after the bars if you had a hook of sorts to outro with, it would have taken it up a notch.

I liked the opening 4 bars a lot btw. I reckon if you switched the order of the 'space in the earth' and 'safe with the words' line, had the 'tryna find my space in the earth' coming straight off the previous started from the bottom, flower, straight from the dirt lines and ended with 'so a young nikka never play it safe with the words' that opening 4 bars would sound like fire, them bars there would be fire.

 

[b_low_brown]

I got u beat OP

Rapped on these





Produced this

U nice Send a beat & ill send one lets compete for best verse on both and let the coli decide

 

[b_low_brown]

Not necessarily no. I think whether or not a hook is needed depends mostly on what the beat sounds like, and the beat you used here works well for a track with no hook, it doesn't really hurt the track quality wise. Why I see 'necessarily' and 'really' tho is because I think you should have closed this out with a hook of sorts, your plan for the beat was fine but after the bars if you had a hook of sorts to outro with it would have taken it up a notch.

I liked the opening 4 bars a lot btw. I reckon if you switched the order of the 'space in the earth' and 'safe with the words' line, had the 'tryna find my space in the earth' coming straight off the previous started from the bottom, flower, straight from the dirt lines and ended with 'so a young nikka never play it safe with the words' that opening 4 bars would sound like fire, them bars there would be fire.

Damn nikka im boutta start having you edit my verses lets make this classic

 

[DOSDUMUNI]

U nice Send a beat & ill send one lets compete for best verse on both and let the coli decide

Shiiiit im wit it

 

[Peter Popoff]

That's dope, you should do a track glorifying trump, the Republicans and bigotry like the hodge twins for clout.

 

[b_low_brown]

Shiiiit im wit it

Good idea right? We could both eat off this g

Whats your usual turnaround time?

 

[b_low_brown]

That's dope, you should do a track glorifying trump, the Republicans and bigotry like the hodge twins for clout.

i got a album dropping & its gonna piss everybody off ill just say that