That flowed naturally to you?
Try-hard and too wordy.
A clever line like that has to be done quick & precise.
"Get in that azz, quick fast, like Ramadan"
"Niccaz don't get the picture till the guns are drawn"
Slickness.
Not verbose and overly-complicated.Starts looking like a reach
great post, breh. Whoever it was, you were patient with that shytposter

And the problem with being too wordy is that it fukks up the rhythm/feel of the song. But rosenbergs don't know nothing bout that.