Just rereleased a my latest video with a different editing, which is better?

[kevlar kohleone]

Revised version below

 

[kevlar kohleone]

I feel like the response was underwhelming

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Thinking about adding more b roll

 

[Artificial Intelligence]

I’ll check it out… been at work so I didn’t have time to watch

 

[Artificial Intelligence]

This is a fire spin on murder to excellence.. I fukk with it. I would take another edit/ try at the video.. it’s aight as is.. but if you can improve .. do it

 

[kevlar kohleone]

This is a fire spin on murder to excellence.. I fukk with it. I would take another edit/ try at the video.. it’s aight as is.. but if you can improve .. do it

Word appreciate u watching it & giving ur feedback

 

[kevlar kohleone]

u know when Kanye would make like one than one video 2 the same song I thought about that as well

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Giving the footage that was initially shot 4 this video 2 another videographer who also edits & see what he comes up with

 

[kevlar kohleone]

What would u change 2 make it more visually pleasing

 

[kevlar kohleone]

?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Keep it the same?

 

[straightcash]

Depends on what kind of video it is. If it's worse than this, then is there a point?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Depends on what kind of video it is. If it's worse than this, then is there a point?

Of course not trying 2 improve on what’s already here any ideas?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Should I add in some different transitions