Its Dark & Hell Is Hot vs It Was Written

[Rapmastermind]

Ironically even though X was the new artist. He was the one that sold "Belly" more than NaS, even though ESCO got top Billing. "Grand Finale" is still a Classic as well as "Life is what you make it:

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o4yU8Pr70nc"]Nas, DMX, Method Man, Ja Rule- Grand Finale - YouTube[/ame]



[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8o-iGytI8ks"]nas life is what you make it - YouTube[/ame]

 

[Gifted one]

Both classics, but I got to go with X on this one

 

[skaNo]

man....... this is hard.. im going with X cause the impact and design of It's dark and hell is hot at the time was insane.

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[the rhyme king]

here is another x verse proving he has better rhyme schemes then nas


Don't came at me wit no bullshyt, use caution
Cause when I wet shyt, I dead shyt, like a-bortions
For bigger portions, of extortion then rack-e-teering
Got nikkaz fearin, fukk whatchu heard, this whatchu hearin
How much darker must it get, how much harder must it hit
See if your hardest nikkaz flip, when I start a bunch of shyt
I like p*ssy, but not up in my face, so gimme three feet
Cause when we creep, no more than three deep, nikkaz see sheep
Bloodhounds found your shyt buried in the mud
Following traces of gun powder residue and blood
A positive ID is impossible, so you know
John Doe is what they gon' be puttin on that tag on yo toe
Now who gon tell yo mother, her baby's under a cover in the morgue
Stiff as a log sniffed out by the dogs
Son of a hard headed nikka that wouldn't listen
so you got whatchu came for
Surgery wit the chainsaw grrrrr, I hit the fukkin streets
cause like I said before ain't nothin goin down until I eat



Mu'fukkers think it's all about impressin bytches and stressin bytches
Well, I'm testin bytches game, adressin bytches, and caressin bytches
And dealin wit mufukkers on all levels
What I'm dealin wit is all devils, fukkin with snakes
Runnin wit nikkaz you call rebels
I got an army of 7-30 nikkaz, dirty nikkaz
that come through and worry nikkaz
30 nikkaz that like to bury nikkaz
And scary nikkaz get it all the time
cause what they got is all of mine
Your man was talkin shyt until I pulled the nine
And if I don't know you, I don't fukk witchu
And if you wit my man, then he gettin stuck witchu
and gave it the money
Cause I just lost my mind when he crossed the line
Sent his back through his chest
then I tossed the nine, boss of crime
Black Gotti, I stack bodies wit the black shotty
bytch-ass nikkaz who act snotty
Get it


nas don't got a rhyme pattern fukking with this shyt at all !!!!!!

RHYME SCHEMES

a rhyme scheme is basically like a blueprint for your writtens or freestyles for that matter. Its all about where your rhyming words are that make this important. Cuz where you rhyme in your lines drastically dictates how your flow will sound.

the "x" represents filler words that pertain to the line but does not rhyme

the CAPPED letters such as "A" "B" "C" "D "E" represent your rhyming words.

 

[JayBaldacci]

here is another x verse proving he has better rhyme schemes then nas


[DMX]
Don't came at me wit no bullshyt, use caution
Cause when I wet shyt, I dead shyt, like abortions
For bigger portions, of extortion then racketeering
Got nikkaz fearin, fukk whatchu heard, this whatchu hearin
How much darker must it get, how much harder must it hit
See if your hardest nikkaz flip, when I start a bunch of shyt
I like p*ssy, but not up in my face, so gimme three feet
Cause when we creep, no more than three deep, nikkaz see sheep
Bloodhounds found your shyt buried in the mud
Following traces of gun powder, residue and blood
A positive ID is impossible, so you know
John Doe is what they gon' be puttin on that tag on yo toe
Now who gon tell yo mother, her baby's under a cover in the morgue
Stiff as a log, sniffed by the dogs
Son of a hard headed nikka that wouldn't listen
so you got whatchu came for
[Sheek]
What's that?
[DMX]
Surgery wit the chainsaw grrrrr, I hit the fukkin streets
cause like I said before ain't nothin goin down until i eat
Mu'fukkers think it's all about impressin bytches and stressin bytches
Well, I'm testin bytches game, adressin bytches, and caressin bytches
And dealin wit mu'fukkers on all levels
What I'm dealin wit is all devils, fukkin with snakes
Runnin wit nikkaz you call rebels
I got an army of 730 nikkaz, dirty nikkaz
that come through and worry nikkaz
30 nikkaz that like to bury nikkaz
And scary nikkaz get it all the time
cause what they got is all of mine
Your man was talkin shyt until I pulled the nine
And if I don't know you, I don't fukk witchu
And if you wit my man, then he gettin stuck witchu
and gave it the money
Cause I just lost my mind when he crossed the line
Sent his back through his chest
then I tossed the nine, boss of crime
Black Gotti, I stack bodies wit the black shotty
bytch-ass nikkaz who act snotty
Get it

nas don't got a rhyme pattern fukking with this shyt at all !!!!!!

RHYME SCHEMES

a rhyme scheme is basically like a blueprint for your writtens or freestyles for that matter. Its all about where your rhyming words are that make this important. Cuz where you rhyme in your lines drastically dictates how your flow will sound.

the "x" represents filler words that pertain to the line but does not rhyme

the CAPPED letters such as "A" "B" "C" "D "E" represent your rhyming words.

"Low profile, rap style
slick as Nu Nile
give the crew pounds
every time we cover new ground
still surviving but there's a few down
back in the essence
I'm asking questions on the phone
with jail adolescents
crying confession, the system's applying the pressure
my mind is guessing
Is living and dying a lesson
but not to be obliged with the mirage
of cars taking you off track
from what the gods focus on hard
Laid up smoking cigars
motioning maids to bring me toast and eggs
kosher, Ice chokers and wolves to smoke ya
my wisdom culture lives in ultra madness
devoted coach bag bytch
broke the average nikka's hopes to get mad rich
But what's the purpose
only the gods can watch the Earth twist
I'm physically trapped down on the surface
with all the crack merchants, snakes and serpents
foul jakes that search us, clowns with four pounds,
this ain't a circus."


i'm not even a multi fiend like you, and i can see nas is better at it than x just off this verse. nas doesn't put emphasis on his multies a lot, so people don't notice them.

 

[the author]

Def It's Dark...when he released flesh of my flesh that same year, i was like

 

[Jesus Shuttlesworth]

dmx's it's dark and hell is hot easily

Burning in hell, but don't deserved to be
Got nikkas I don't even know that wanna murder me
It's because they heard of me
And they know that the Dark is for real
The bark is for real, when you see that spark it'll kill
Be poppin, robbin and chill, take it over there bark wit' it
From Ohio to Calito Baltimore back to New York wit' it
Come through flyin', a 129
Up the school street cuz i come through mine
Barking my dogs, get at me nikka
arf arf arf
Get at me nikka
What the deal is, never forget what real is
Them cats that used to say X is the best know he still is
Can't help but feel this, putting goosebumps on your arms
Take you there if you want but I lose chunks with the bomb
Then come for the star
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde and it's getting warm
Feel me yo

dmx was great rhyming on this album

If X has a case, you're not making it.

 

[the rhyme king]

"Low profile, rap style
slick as Nu Nile
give the crew pounds
every time we cover new ground
still surviving but there's a few down
back in the essence
I'm asking questions on the phone
with jail ado-lescents
crying con-fession, the system's applying the pressure
my mind is guessing
Is living and dying a lesson
but not to be obliged with the mir-age
of cars taking you off track
from what the gods fo-cus on hard
Laid up smoking ci-gars
motioning maids to bring me toast and eggs
kosher, Ice chokers and wolves to smoke ya
my wisdom culture lives in ultra madness
devoted coach bag bytch
broke the average nikka's hopes to get mad rich
But what's the purpose
only the gods can watch the Earth twist
I'm physically trapped down on the surface
with all the crack merchants, snakes and serpents
foul jakes that search us, clowns with four pounds,
this ain't a circus."


i'm not even a multi fiend like you, and i can see nas is better at it than x just off this verse. nas doesn't put emphasis on his multies a lot, so people don't notice them.

this is mostly 2 and 3 syllables this is weak breh

 

[the rhyme king]

If X has a case, you're not making it.

and if u trying to proof your not a troll u not helping your case

 

[JayBaldacci]

this is mostly 2 and 3 syllables this is weak breh

you missed the multies as usual. thats why you think x is better technically. nas' multies fly over your head because he doesn't put them on snares where it's easy to pick up.

 

[the rhyme king]

you missed the multies as usual. thats why you think x is better technically. nas' multies fly over your head because he doesn't put them on snares where it's easy to pick up.

no i did'nt u just trolling as usual and what does rhyme placement have anything to do with multis oh man u have no idea about what u talking about

u just rambling and ranting raving lmao

 

[JayBaldacci]

no i did'nt u just trolling as usual and what does rhyme placement have anything to do with multis oh man u have no idea about what u talking about

u just rambling and ranting raving lmao

in the first few lines u missed slick as nu nile/give the crew pounds.

also back in the essence/askin questions/adolecent

i could go in more but that would take forever.

in closing, dmx is not more technical than nas. nobody with half a brain would say that.

which album is better is a different topic. which i would give to x.

 

[THE MACHINE]

Rollin with X...

Only two of us knew the answer, and one of us is dead/
So anyone who seeks the truth, can get it straight in the head/
Then you and him can discuss what I said/
Yeah, it was wrong, dawg but I slid/
Imma pay one day, just not right now/
You hear my shyt all in the streets, I'm kinda hot right now

 

[the rhyme king]

in the first few lines u missed slick as nu nile/give the crew pounds.

also back in the essence/askin questions/adolecent

i could go in more but that would take forever.

in closing, dmx is not more technical than nas. nobody with half a brain would say that.

which album is better is a different topic. which i would give to x.

u do realize multis have to match in syllable count

back in the essence 5 syllables

asking questions 4 syllables this is considered broken multis

u clearly don't know what multis are so im not gonna go back and forth with u

 

[Jesus Shuttlesworth]

and if u trying to proof your not a troll u not helping your case

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