Im trynna experiment with the Cuban Linx/Liquid Swords production style. Looking for feedback

[ZEB WALTON]

I think I was way off with the tempo though actually

na bro, see as someone who also raps as wellas produces, this shyt is perfect. id adjust my flow. you captured the rza shyt a lil wit it being off. it aint off.it needs some polish, mixing, some extras. but as is, that loop is nice.

 

[ZEB WALTON]

and real talk. if you coulda filtered some of those soudns thru this s950 i got next to me, your shyt would have that thump n grit like rzas too

 

[ThaRealness]

na bro, see as someone who also raps as wellas produces, this shyt is perfect. id adjust my flow. you captured the rza shyt a lil wit it being off. it aint off.it needs some polish, mixing, some extras. but as is, that loop is nice.

Im listening on laptop speakers right now so it sounds different. But yeah maybe youre right. i think more then anything I should have added a chorus. On to the next one though

 

[ZEB WALTON]

Im listening on laptop speakers right now so it sounds different. But yeah maybe youre right. i think more then anything I should have added a chorus. On to the next one though

well yea, add somethin bro. unless you have an mc who can carry a loop. not many of them left tho

 

[((ReFleXioN)) EteRNaL]

its a nice melody but I think the chops could be blended in better. I can hear a click in the beat. at 4 seconds, 7, 10. also maybe bring out the bass more or play your own behind it. and like others have said...livin up the drums. also could use a smooth voice sample to switch it up every now and then. but it has potential.

 

[Droopy]

i like the beat on that life's a game

 

[ThaRealness]

i like the beat on that life's a game

thanks bruh

 

[emperor bohe]

some dope ass shyt.