IF U WERE IN A CAR WITH NO AUX JUST A CD PLAYER WOULD U LISTEN 2 THIS OR THE RADIO?

[MyMindWarpsandBends]

that I'm cut from a different fabric
I'm from new haven ct some blocks away from where yale is located
thats why I'm wearing the sweater
people think ct suburbs & farm land but theres some fukked up parts & I'm trying 2 make it out
wit this rap shyt thats why theres also like a never give up theme thru out the tape!

You could’ve juxtaposed the Yale sweater with things that represent the area you come from to show that even though even though y’all got Yale over there shyt still ain’t sweet. I think that would’ve brought your point home a little bit more and showed people what youre trying to do with your music. You can clearly rap though, I hear it in the rhyme schemes and the concepts are well executed, the hooks are on point too. You just need a better mix on these records and somebody who can help you get your point across visually as far the artwork goes. How long have you been rapping?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

You could’ve juxtaposed the Yale sweater with things that represent the area you come from to show that even though even though y’all got Yale over there shyt still ain’t sweet. I think that would’ve brought your point home a little bit more and showed people what youre trying to do with your music. You can clearly rap though, I hear it in the rhyme schemes and the concepts are well executed, the hooks are on point too. You just need a better mix on these records and somebody who can help you get your point across visually as far the artwork goes. How long have you been rapping?

since i was ten yrs old

 

[Spiritual Stratocaster]

First critique...I seen the album cover and thought this was gonna be a roast thread

The cover has too much going on bro..

 

[tonyclifton]

the sentence underneath the title?

Yea . Just let the music speak for itself. You got some talent no reason to try and seem all deep. Let them get that in your music


Just my opinion

 

[mozichrome]

thread drew my attention, i got time. guess i'll listen

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Yea . Just let the music speak for itself. You got some talent no reason to try and seem all deep. Let them get that in your music


Just my opinion

appreciate the critique

 

[kevlar kohleone]

thread drew my attention, i got time. guess i'll listen

let me know what u think when u get done?

 

[kevlar kohleone]

First critique...I seen the album cover and thought this was gonna be a roast thread

The cover has too much going on bro..

did u against ur better judgement listen anyway?

 

[AlbertPullhoez]

Dude got one of them Viper album covers


But I'll give it a listen since most of the reviews are positive

 

[smokeurobinson]

Not bad.


Lyrically on point. I went in not expecting much but this was on point. I let the whole thing rock while multitasking. Backpackerish appeal. This coulda been popping if the year was 1996.


"Dumb Hot" and "Black Dont Lives Matter" could be singles.



I dig the skits too. But that lady lied about Capt Crunch tho.....I had to do my Googles and Capt Crunch isn't even real.

 

[Spiritual Stratocaster]

did u against ur better judgement listen anyway?

Reviews are positive so i'm gonna give it a listen..

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Dude got one of them Viper album covers


But I'll give it a listen since most of the reviews are positive

appreciate that

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Not bad.


Lyrically on point. I went in not expecting much but this was on point. I let the whole thing rock while multitasking. Backpackerish appeal. This coulda been popping if the year was 1996.


"Dumb Hot" and "Black Dont Lives Matter" could be singles.



I dig the skits too. But that lady lied about Capt Crunch tho.....I had to do my Googles and Capt Crunch isn't even real.

lol i used that skit because i really felt like she drove the point home & it was also trending on social media at the time

 

[kevlar kohleone]

Reviews are positive so i'm gonna give it a listen..

thanks

 

[Rigamortus]

Cover is funny as hell. Everything from the facial expression down to the random ass KFC cup.

But after listening Gemz and Black Lives Dont Matter are my 2 favorite. The beats are

Also, where the fukk did the idea for the Confederate skit come from? shyt caught me way off guard.