I Shot and Directed a Music Video... Come and Drop Some Feedback for a Breh

[pickles]

I thought it was really good.

The shot of the ceiling fan though. LOL

 

[GoldenGlove]

I thought it was really good.

The shot of the ceiling fan though. LOL

 

[Mowgli]

I thought it was really good.

The shot of the ceiling fan though. LOL

Maybe he was in a hot ass apartment with no AC bugging out because he knows a nikka that knows Brazillian Jiujitsu has his girl

Which means she's never coming back to a suicidal simp with a drinking problem that talks to himself in his apartment with guns to his head. I guess that's why he bodied her

 

[Dwolf]

Good picture quality
Good story telling with camera work
Thought the opening shot lookin at the phone could have used an extra cut/angle or 2.
Parts that seemed like an amateur would have left the camera in one shot you made dynamic by fading to the shot digging the grave
I'd say the worst part about it all is the song.

I wasn't annoyed by the camera work at all. Good work. Practice refines technique so progression seems natural since it seems like you are artistic with your work

 

[Mowgli]

He did good with what he had to work with. I'd say it was more like a youtube video and less like a music video though but that's probably because of lighting and camera

 

[StraxStrax]

I thought it was really good.

The shot of the ceiling fan though. LOL

Legit best shot of the video tho.

 

[Kaydigi]

Pro's

• You didn't have 2 remotes tape together for a gun
• You went from some cuddly bear Ashanti and Ja Rule at the amusment park
  Spoiler: reference
  to straight prodigy high off of drugs location
  Spoiler: Throw a TV you crazy

Con's

• Your ambilent lighting needs some work
• You should have used a camera dolly track for the 3rd shot, it would have looked better
• i'm kidding, no cons nikka!!!

 

[Notorious 1 E.Y.E.]

Pro's

• You didn't have 2 remotes tape together for a gun
• You went from some cuddly bear Ashanti and Ja Rule at the amusment park
  Spoiler: reference
  to straight prodigy high off of drugs location
  Spoiler: Throw a TV you crazy

Con's

• Your ambilent lighting needs some work
• You should have used a camera dolly track for the 3rd shot, it would have looked better
• i'm kidding, no cons nikka!!!

yo...

 

[Mr. Manhattan]

It was not bad, it was great for your first time actually.. i think the editing and transitions fit in line with the story... song was pretty good too

Cons: Some of the lighting during the dark parts was over exposed... needed more shadows for a more effective approach
Thats about it

Good work

 

[Captain Crunch]

I wish you would of shown how that relationship ended and detailed his depression post breakup(show him trying drugs to ease the pain at a party, talking to other girls but realizing that they don't compare to his ex).