GOAT Comic series Kids 2 Kings, made by our Coli own, review and tag!

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This is amazing breh. The music, the sound ex, the animation, the story, the characters. Big shout out to everybody who worked on this. Dap, Rep, 5 stars, and Watched on DA.
All the character's are great, but my favorite character is Seth. Second favorite is Auset. I can feel the storyline getting better and better. Can't wait for the next part.
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Bookmark, I'll check it out :ehh:
 

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The opening music is apropos; it sounds like adventure and epic music. Great job. My browser won't open the comic so I'll look to using Firefox. You should include the story's sypnosis in your OP, @Blacksands :

"Written by Manuel Godoy and drawn by David Lenormand, Kids 2 Kings is a story about a young boy named Ausar whose life goal is to rule Kemet. This goal leads him on a journey to far off lands in the ancient world where he deals with the complicated issues involving wars and ancient gods that seek his death. He is acompanied by his kinfolk Seth, Auset, and Nehbet as they travel the world. The world of Black Sands is deep and the original cultures of the time are all represented in this sci-fi, fantasy retelling of ancient myths."
 

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This is amazing breh. The music, the sound ex, the animation, the story, the characters. Big shout out to everybody who worked on this. Dap, Rep, 5 stars, and Watched on DA.
All the character's are great, but my favorite character is Seth. Second favorite is Auset. I can feel the storyline getting better and better. Can't wait for the next part.
:whoo:
@Tenchi Ryu @LordLoco @TheLostOnes @Jayne @MR. WEST
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The opening music is apropos; it sounds like adventure and epic music. Great job. My browser won't open the comic so I'll look to using Firefox. You should include the story's sypnosis in your OP, @Blacksands :

"Written by Manuel Godoy and drawn by David Lenormand, Kids 2 Kings is a story about a young boy named Ausar whose life goal is to rule Kemet. This goal leads him on a journey to far off lands in the ancient world where he deals with the complicated issues involving wars and ancient gods that seek his death. He is acompanied by his kinfolk Seth, Auset, and Nehbet as they travel the world. The world of Black Sands is deep and the original cultures of the time are all represented in this sci-fi, fantasy retelling of ancient myths."
good suggestion
 
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Downloaded and read through it.

AMAZING artwork.
Simply beautiful.

The overall writing style (going back and forth between vernacular used back then and now is a bit jarring; the script needs a bit of work to fit a comic book style of writing; the onomotopeia or however you spell it doesn't go in speech bubbles... Otherwise, the person looks like they're saying the sound effect) and grammar needs touching up (it's eavesdropping, not ease dropping... It's the grammar Nazi in me), but I like what this is becoming.

I'm only this critical because I want it to do well...
I'm staying tuned, regardless.
Keep up the good work, breh.
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Downloaded and read through it.

AMAZING artwork.
Simply beautiful.

The overall writing style (going back and forth between vernacular used back then and now is a bit jarring; the script needs a bit of work to fit a comic book style of writing; the onomotopeia or however you spell it doesn't go in speech bubbles... Otherwise, the person looks like they're saying the sound effect) and grammar needs touching up (it's eavesdropping, not ease dropping... It's the grammar Nazi in me), but I like what this is becoming.

I'm only this critical because I want it to do well...
I'm staying tuned, regardless.
Keep up the good work, breh.
:salute:
We will fix that. Thanx
 
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