Fellow Rapping/Lyricism nerds, is this impressive to you?
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Solomon Lurke
My Boys Dey Be Lurkin...
Not anything I haven’t heard before, pretty standard raps for that style but still worth checking out more from them.
Yeah, bars wise they’re regular, but the 1 rhyme scheme for a whole record is pretty cool if you’re into rhyme schemes and shhit.
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
As far as lyrical shyt-talking duet tracks go Broken Language did it a lot better 30 years ago.
Rhyming the same four syllables for a punchline record isn't impressive as a lyrical display imo, it would be more impressive lyrically if it was a coherent story or if the flow was more extravagant (which Broken Language does to a T). it's not a bad song and the 2nd verse came off better than the 1st but it also does nothing new.
Rhyming the same four syllables for a punchline record isn't impressive as a lyrical display imo, it would be more impressive lyrically if it was a coherent story or if the flow was more extravagant (which Broken Language does to a T). it's not a bad song and the 2nd verse came off better than the 1st but it also does nothing new.
pointproven214
i speak facts not emotions
no it shows limited vocab and it has been done before
Plankton
All Star
Yeah its cool but Kool G Rap, Azealia Banks and Eminem already did that tho.
Peabo Bryson
All Star
It was cool by "current" standards... beat was nice. But they didn't really hyper-focus the multi-rhyme scheme, they strayed from it too much and just basically rhymed it at the last word of some of the lines...
This scheme/concept was done wildly better, like almost 20 years ago by the dude Celph Titled who runs with Jedi Mind Tricks / Demigodz / Fort Minor:
This scheme/concept was done wildly better, like almost 20 years ago by the dude Celph Titled who runs with Jedi Mind Tricks / Demigodz / Fort Minor:
Iverson_64
Superstar
Plus, it's not that hard to pull off if you're doing straight punchline/freestyle rap.
But telling an actual story with that same rhyme scheme is where the real challenge lies.
Majestyx
Duck Season
jay nice is decent sometimes, but rush is mad regular.
Iverson_64
Superstar
I prefer Rush. Every single verse is exactly like the last, lol, but I like that pop shhit, Willie the Kid-esque fly talk,
. Jay Nice got a corny ass voice, imo. They both kinda regular tho tbh, like a makeshift Griselda, rapping wise…I just like the talk.Idk how familiar you are with them and their crew and shhit but they got a fat ATL nig named Cheeko with them, he ain’t no bar heavy type but his style is kinda dope, and original.
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Majestyx
Duck Season
most these dudes are best in groups to me. i dont even like griselda so i dont really touch any of these dudes music. I wills ay i do fukk wit Left LaneI prefer Rush. Every single verse is exactly like the last, lol, but I like that pop shhit, Willie the Kid-esque fly talk,
Left gets busy, he makes better music than all of them
I would be satisfied if I wrote that.
Obviously you can pick it apart and be weird about it but these nikkas styling to me.
