Feedback wanted on company website

[JAY?]

Like somebody said the design is kind of dated. If I was you I'd just pick out something from here: http://themeforest.net/ I do freelance web development and I don't design anything from scratch anymore.
Social media game is important, gotta have a facebook page, twitter too

good lookin.
I'll look into it
I was just practicing with that 1 since it was the first free one I found
I haven't touched a PC in years since the iPad came out
and the only time I tried making a page was during the AOL days

 

[Lakers Offseason]

Lose the textured background on the page itself (where your content is). You can keep it on the side panels.

The diagonal navigation is unnecessary.

I personally would use real-life photos instead of an cartoon.

Try weebly.com. They have a good selection of free templates.

Good luck.

 

[BlvdBrawler]

I'd increase the size of the toll fee and gas charge so that people don't feel you're trying to be intentionally deceptive about it. A lot of people could miss it and be surprised when the charges show up.
I'd make the guy in the cartoon black since it's gonna be black people showing up.
The diagonal things along the top look like they're running off the page. Maybe lower them a bit and show their end stopping just before the top of the page.

Good luck man. I wish you all the success in the world.

 

[JAY?]

I'd increase the size of the toll fee and gas charge so that people don't feel you're trying to be intentionally deceptive about it. A lot of people could miss it and be surprised when the charges show up.
I'd make the guy in the cartoon black since it's gonna be black people showing up.
The diagonal things along the top look like they're running off the page. Maybe lower them a bit and show their end stopping just before the top of the page.

Good luck man. I wish you all the success in the world.

Thanks a lot.
It's much appreciated.

Yea. I'll def make the fees bigger
I have no idea why it's like that but I did notice the cut off in the letters
If I was to make the guy in the logo black, nobody would call
Plus none of us are black
We're Dominican
And yes I know all about my African roots
I embrace it fully
My complexion is not much darker than eminems tho
I'm not trying to make this into a race thing
That happens way too often here

 

[BlvdBrawler]

I'm not trying to make this into a race thing
That happens way too often here

Nah I agree. Just my $0.02. If nobody black is showing up then yea keep him white.

 

[Domingo Halliburton]

edit: forget it I didn't look at the contact us page.

 

[88m3]

Thanks a lot.
It's much appreciated.

Yea. I'll def make the fees bigger
I have no idea why it's like that but I did notice the cut off in the letters
If I was to make the guy in the logo black, nobody would call
Plus none of us are black
We're Dominican
And yes I know all about my African roots
I embrace it fully
My complexion is not much darker than eminems tho
I'm not trying to make this into a race thing
That happens way too often here

saved yourself with that line

 

[JAY?]

saved yourself with that line

So u gonna call me when ur sink backs up and u can't fix it ur self?

 

[88m3]

So u gonna call me when ur sink backs up and u can't fix it ur self?

For sure man I'll write the number down, if I can ever throw some work your way I would be happy to. There's a company that takes care of everything in the flat I live in, I don't pay for anything. Things may change in the next few years though.

 

[JAY?]

For sure man I'll write the number down, if I can ever throw some work your way I would be happy to. There's a company that takes care of everything in the flat I live in, I don't pay for anything. Things may change in the next few years though.

They got flats in Brooklyn?

 

[Blackking]

good lookin on the feedback

just so you know most people think during the holiday people don't want services n shyt.. they think it's time to chill.

it's true people don't wanna make as many appointments... but the competition is chilling... so you should book for Jan, customers think, 'oh whatever, that's next year n shyt we can do that" so i would go the hardest right now, cuz the way Jan pops off is indicative of the type of year that you'll have.

 

[Kritic]

don't get

good lookin.
I'll look into it
I was just practicing with that 1 since it was the first free one I found
I haven't touched a PC in years since the iPad came out
and the only time I tried making a page was during the AOL days

don't get ish fuq you still need a computer and laptop to be closer to 100% efficient. no one's at 100% efficiency but you need an internet phone [mostly], mobile computing and a workstation to be closer to there...

well that's my opinion and secret..

 

[JAY?]

just so you know most people think during the holiday people don't want services n shyt.. they think it's time to chill.

it's true people don't wanna make as many appointments... but the competition is chilling... so you should book for Jan, customers think, 'oh whatever, that's next year n shyt we can do that" so i would go the hardest right now, cuz the way Jan pops off is indicative of the type of year that you'll have.

The service I provide is usually an emergency
It happens but it's not often when people make appointments
When ur toilets clogged and u can't flush ur nor gonna wait a week to call
When ur basement is flooding cuz ur main sewer is full of roots u want me there ASAP
Everybody lives in a house with pipes and drains
Emergencies are oblivious to holidays
We definitely trying to go hard
Thanks for the input
Much appreciated

 

[JAY?]

don't get

don't get ish fuq you still need a computer and laptop to be closer to 100% efficient. no one's at 100% efficiency but you need an internet phone [mostly], mobile computing and a workstation to be closer to there...

well that's my opinion and secret..

Yea
I just got a pc
And we gonna work off of a cell phone
Reason being the work station gonna be in my bedroom
I got the wife and kids here
When I'm not able to pick up, somebody else will have it

Edit
So as I just got a pc for the first time in years
I didn't know I have to pay to use word and excel and shyt like that
Anybody got a hook up for the activation key?

 

[88m3]

They got flats in Brooklyn?

Technically I guess it would be a townhouse or maisonette since it's more than one floor.