Feedback wanted on company website

[JAY?]

http://rjfullcleaning.webs.com/

This aint the finalized website or domain
im still workin on it and practicin on that page
i would like feedback from ya
this is the first time i try doing somethin like this since my aol 4.0 profile
any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

 

[Chris.B]

looks good but it depends on the "vibe you want to give".

 

[JAY?]

looks good but it depends on the "vibe you want to give".

elaborate
the vibe i want to give is
i want u to call me

 

[JAY?]

looks good but it depends on the "vibe you want to give".

elaborate
the vibe i want to give is
i want u to call me

 

[Chris.B]

I get the feel that it's small business which is good, if you are going for the "mom and pops" shop appeal.

 

[JAY?]

I get the feel that it's small business which is good, if you are going for the "mom and pops" shop appeal.

got u
yea we small time
only 4 us
we only got 1 official truck
we doing it from the crib
my bedroom is the office
definitely mom and pops status
hopefully in a year or 2 it'll be a lil bigger

 

[Blackking]

got u
yea we small time
only 4 us
we only got 1 official truck
we doing it from the crib
my bedroom is the office
definitely mom and pops status
hopefully in a year or 2 it'll be a lil bigger

I would say stay small as long as you can stay small. Grow revenue.. but don't actually grow until you are forced to. Until you can't even handle working from the crib any longer.

Also, fake it til you make it. Peacock. No pic or no testimonials? I'm assuming you'll have that on the real site or At least make a few testimonials..

 

[GoldenGlove]

The text for the 'Testimonials' and 'Contact Us' tabs at the top are cut off. I'm viewing in Google Chrome

 

[Blackking]

http://rjfullcleaning.webs.com/

This aint the finalized website or domain
im still workin on it and practicin on that page
i would like feedback from ya
this is the first time i try doing somethin like this since my aol 4.0 profile
any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

oh yeah....and some real shyt here too:

for now, just my opinion:
your gonna be going to people houses.. always find out what they do. Get to know them n shyt. At least know their profession... so that when u provide that good service, that's a connect.... that's how u build up to knowing a 'guy' who does everything.

for later on:
Plus you can find find out about start ups n shyt. just keep in the back of ur mind .. save ur money. then make lil small investments into any start up companies u provide the draining or whatever service for. Eventually when some of the start ups blow up u have all this money. some people made millions doing this and they don't even really do shyt. The best way to make money is by not even really having to do shyt for it.

 

[Kritic]

i'd say add/link a facebook business page and vice versa.

and as you grow Like clients page on your facebook page. you could also Like your competitors pages on your personal facebook page to know what they're up to.

i personally don't think website out of facebook are necessary. you could also throw a link on craigslist and update it every month.

my facebook business page does numbers and i pay for advertising for big days. $5 for 24hrs and it pays for itself.

 

[unit321]

It's okay. It has a very late 90's website vibe about it, but the navigation tabs at the top are nice.

1. On the Home page, put an asterisk at the end of the line "Only 49.99 Any Single Line". Then, put an asterisk before "$2 Gas fee" and "$15 Toll Charge for Bronx Residents". Text formatting is kind of jacked up below the "We electronically snake and clean".
2. The "Who are we" page is fine.
3. The Photos page is unnecessary. You are in a service industry, not selling products. What kind of photos are you going to put here?
4. The Testimonials page isn't coming up for me.
5. The "Contact Us" page is fine.

 

[JAY?]

It's okay. It has a very late 90's website vibe about it, but the navigation tabs at the top are nice.

1. On the Home page, put an asterisk at the end of the line "Only 49.99 Any Single Line". Then, put an asterisk before "$2 Gas fee" and "$15 Toll Charge for Bronx Residents". Text formatting is kind of jacked up below the "We electronically snake and clean".
2. The "Who are we" page is fine.
3. The Photos page is unnecessary. You are in a service industry, not selling products. What kind of photos are you going to put here?
4. The Testimonials page isn't coming up for me.
5. The "Contact Us" page is fine.

I wanted to put pics of us actually doing different kinds of jobs in the photo section.

yea. The formatting is retarded . Don't know why it came out like that.

thanks for the feedback

 

[JAY?]

oh yeah....and some real shyt here too:

for now, just my opinion:
your gonna be going to people houses.. always find out what they do. Get to know them n shyt. At least know their profession... so that when u provide that good service, that's a connect.... that's how u build up to knowing a 'guy' who does everything.

for later on:
Plus you can find find out about start ups n shyt. just keep in the back of ur mind .. save ur money. then make lil small investments into any start up companies u provide the draining or whatever service for. Eventually when some of the start ups blow up u have all this money. some people made millions doing this and they don't even really do shyt. The best way to make money is by not even really having to do shyt for it.

yea
3 of us already have the experience
doing the job isn't the problem
its going to be getting the phone to ring

the lead guy started working for a company 5 years ago
they had 4 trucks at the time
they now have over 15
and they pocket over 100k a month
after expenses

I don't expect shyt to happen over night
I know it's gonna take time and dedication
we been working on this for like a year
I'm sure we will make mistakes
but I'm hoping for the best.

good lookin on the feedback

 

[ghostwriterx]

Like somebody said the design is kind of dated. If I was you I'd just pick out something from here: http://themeforest.net/ I do freelance web development and I don't design anything from scratch anymore.
Social media game is important, gotta have a facebook page, twitter too

 

[Rawtid]

The diagonal bars at the top are cut off for me. So like I don't see the last few letters on the word "testimonial".