I normally talk about depression and killing myself type jokes. I just don't do over the top enthusiastic well. I get what you're saying though. Props to everyone in here
feedback on my standup
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I normally talk about depression and killing myself type jokes. I just don't do over the top enthusiastic well. I get what you're saying though. Props to everyone in here
BasedPrime
Xbox Woe
Havent watched yet
Nefflum nigga
Bred from insolence
u funny tho man. u just gotta be more loose and energetic on stage. work on that delivery.
My thoughts exactly!
a lot better than before
huge improvement
Just keep improving and the skys the limit
huge improvement
Just keep improving and the skys the limit
Pinyapplesuckas
He's A Good Man
Just keep going. Work on the segway. You probably took drinks in between the wrong jokes as far as pause time goes. Post something in a few months.
You're extremely stiff on stage man, like u need a hug or something. Relax your shoulders johnny bravo and work on your delivery.
seems like more work would lead to the improvements in delivery that you need. 
for the balls to go up and do it. i thought there was some fundamentally good material that got passed over on
is your right side paralyzed doe
for the balls to go up and do it. i thought there was some fundamentally good material that got passed over onis your right side paralyzed doe
First props to you for doing this. Stand up is hard a shyt. The first video you seem really stiff, you basically did not move your other hand/arm at all. shyt looked really weird.
As far as the jokes, um yeah you might to work on that.
As far as your second video.
at the topic. I don't really understand what they are laughing at because none of that was funny.
I am really tempted to say there is a difference between what white folk and black folk find funny, but I love Bill Burr so I really can't say that.
I listen to comedians podcasts and they say to anyone who wants to do standup to keep writing down material.
As far as the jokes, um yeah you might to work on that.
As far as your second video.
at the topic. I don't really understand what they are laughing at because none of that was funny.I am really tempted to say there is a difference between what white folk and black folk find funny, but I love Bill Burr so I really can't say that.
I listen to comedians podcasts and they say to anyone who wants to do standup to keep writing down material.
Jesus Shuttlesworth
I Got Game
Do you have movement in your right arm?