feedback on my standup
- Thread starter NonPareil
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Nefflum nigga
Bred from insolence
yo big jack osbourne lookin ass
I am a fat white dude. This was addressed in the video!
i know you cant help how you sound... maybe you should smoke some hookah or blunts to get some bass in your voice.. i had to cut it off after 4 minutes..
U Funnier than Dane Cook 
I'll end on that
I'll end on that
Was this your first time on stage doing this? You looked nervous af
My face didnt move at all watching this. You need to learn how to segway. Especially when you just spit out something random after your joke IS A DUD!!!!!!! Some decent platforms for jokes like the dog shelter shyt but the shyt just wasnt hitting. Punchlines just didnt exist.
first time doing the material. Didnt have much comitted to memory
LA Fisher
Banned
Air plane joke
Shark attack joke
One star
snitched
reporting youtube video
Exits thread
Shark attack joke
One star
snitched
reporting youtube video
Exits thread
I tried breh but couldn't make past 3 min 
My Girl is Bow Legged
JUST DO IT LIKE
needs refining but overall there's some solid stuff in there
not my kind of shyt but a lot of white folks would prolly feel it
I'm not gonna hate cause I've done it before and it takes balls to even get up there let alone talk for 15 mins, looks a lot easier than it really is
not my kind of shyt but a lot of white folks would prolly feel it
I'm not gonna hate cause I've done it before and it takes balls to even get up there let alone talk for 15 mins, looks a lot easier than it really is
beenz
Rap Guerilla
if thats the first time doing stand up, its actually good. that shyt looks very difficult.
This is the "weirdest" set ive done so far. lol I'm not worried about getting hated on, I've killed plenty, I've bombed plenty. Not gonna hurt my feelings, harsh feedback is good, and like you said, i normally play white audiences
Breh...
Watch some 90's def jam videos
watch eddie murphy raw
Your not only lacking material
but that can be fixed
But stage presence
You can practically have shytty material
But have great stage charisma and get by
Jokes come and go
Stage presence doesn't
I stopped halfway
You had an easy crowd
Watch some 90's def jam videos
watch eddie murphy raw
Your not only lacking material
but that can be fixed
But stage presence
You can practically have shytty material
But have great stage charisma and get by
Jokes come and go
Stage presence doesn't
I stopped halfway
You had an easy crowd