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Eminem's Lead Single 'Berzerk' **CDQ**
- Thread starter Chief Queef
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Just like I did with addiction I’m ’bout to kick it
Like a magician, critics I turn to crickets
Got ‘em still on the fence ready to pick it
But quick get impaled when I tell ‘em stick it
So sick I’m looking pale, well that’s my pigment
’bout to go ham, ya bish, shout out to Kendrick
Let’s bring it back to that vintage Slim, bytch!
The art of the MCing mixed with da Vinci and MC Ren
And I don’t mean Stimpy’s friend, bytch
Been public enemy since you thought PE was gym, bytch
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Just stfu you are exposing yourself. You don't know shyt about hip hop.
The subject matter might be corny, but the technical skills are on point (delivery, mic presence, lyricism, etc.).
The subject matter on Berzerk is not just corny, it's bad MCing altogether.
Just like I did with addiction I’m ’bout to kick it
Like a magician, critics I turn to crickets
Got ‘em still on the fence ready to pick it
But quick get impaled when I tell ‘em stick it
So sick I’m looking pale, well that’s my pigment
’bout to go ham, ya bish, shout out to Kendrick
Let’s bring it back to that vintage Slim, bytch!
The art of the MCing mixed with da Vinci and MC Ren
And I don’t mean Stimpy’s friend, bytch
Been public enemy since you thought PE was gym, bytch
Those are trivial bars ... Nothing like his writing pre 2003. There's no mic presence, no impact behind anything he's saying. The delivery is monotone as fukk. Phonetically, he might as well be crooked I or some other generic rappity-rap-rapper.
Vintage Eminem would piss all over this clown.
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so you just jacked my name like that
must be a mexican jay z fan
if anything, I need to change this name, i dont want to be mistaken for an eminem dikk riding faggat.
his old singles are corny as hell but they ALL had a good flow pattern that the biggest Em hater could not deny or call wack.he has no flow pattern AT ALL in his new single.the beat & hook is pretty good but his verses just sloppy and messy as fukk.
When the guy is rapping about "my bum is on your lips, my bum is on your lips" I don't give a fukk if he's spitting like big pun it's an immediate skip. when a song is released that my grandma thinks is funny and catchy I don't care if he's spitting like big L. He was never saying anything in those old singles and he's still not saying anything in this one. Like I said I have dreaded all of his singles since My Name Is (which has actually turned out to be the least corniest)
And can someone please provide me with 1 clever, deep or amazing punchline on any of his first singles? Anyone???? I'll wait...
ok so rank his singles then fakkit starting with the one that completely blew you away first.
your obviously like 16 or sum shyt.. EM never used punchlines in his lead singles until recovery
"my name is" has 0 punchlines
"real slim shady" had 1 punchline -- "Then you wonder how can kids eat up these albums like Valiums"
"without me" had 0 punchlines
"just lose it" has 0 punchlines
we made you" - had 0 punchlines
"not afraid" - so fukk the world
Feed it beans, it's gassed up, if it thinks it's stopping me
I'ma be what I set out to be, without a doubt undoubtedly
And all those who look down on me I'm tearing down your balcony
Okay quit playing with the scissors and shyt, and cut the crap
I shouldn't have to rhyme these words in a rhythm for you to know it's a rap
You said you was king, you lied through your teeth, for that
fukk your feelings, instead of getting crowned you're getting capped
it's time to exorcise these demons
These motherfukkers are doing jumping jacks now!
So I solemnly swear to always treat this roof, like my daughters
And raise it, you couldn't lift a single shingle on it!
Cause the way I feel, I'm strong enough to go to the club
Or the corner pub, and lift the whole liquor counter up
Cause I'm raising the bar
Been public enemy since you thought PE was gym, bytch
But I am tryin’ to find a way to get you alone,(a loan) car note!
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My Name Is = corny
Real Slim shady = corny
Without Me = CORNY
Just Lose it = Beyond Corny
We Made You = corny
Not Afraid = flaming gay and beyond Corny
Berzerk = corny
I'm still confused as to why people think it's over for Em after hearing Berzerk
either:
a) you find any of the songs mentioned above actually good and not corny which in turn would make you corny
or
b) you're just a hater
Every single Em has ever released has been complete garbage in comparison to the rest of the album. This includes Encore. I learned to accept it after Without Me. They all suck, complete garbage, not aimed at the average hip hop head. how hard is it to get it? I've read all the exact same responses year in and year out about his singles. People are fukking retarded if they thought this single was going to be any different. I actually don't mind the track because imo it's better than any sing;e he's released post "Real Slim Shady"
Now all u cocksuckers fukk off I got work to do
There's noting particularly wrong with the "corny" on songs like without me, I dig that song a lot actually, and all of his other singles in that vain to varying degrees, I would rather listen to "we made you" than this shyt.
The difference between this song and all those other joints is that this isn't really intentionally corny. Not afraid was corny mostly because we have demonic ass eminem singing with a church chior, it was more weird than it was bad execution.
Exactly but I keep hearing people say his punchlines are wack on the song as if the things he was saying on all of his radio singles weren't wack. The content has always been wack on the singles so I'm not sure why people are crying that eminem is completely done after hearing the very first wack radio pop single because he's not spitting his ass offyour obviously like 16 or sum shyt.. EM never used punchlines in his lead singles until recovery
"my name is" has 0 punchlines
"real slim shady" had 1 punchline -- "Then you wonder how can kids eat up these albums like Valiums"
"without me" had 0 punchlines
"just lose it" has 0 punchlines
we made you" - had 0 punchlines
"not afraid" - so fukk the world
Feed it beans, it's gassed up, if it thinks it's stopping me
I'ma be what I set out to be, without a doubt undoubtedly
And all those who look down on me I'm tearing down your balcony
Okay quit playing with the scissors and shyt, and cut the crap
I shouldn't have to rhyme these words in a rhythm for you to know it's a rap
You said you was king, you lied through your teeth, for that
fukk your feelings, instead of getting crowned you're getting capped
it's time to exorcise these demons
These motherfukkers are doing jumping jacks now!
So I solemnly swear to always treat this roof, like my daughters
And raise it, you couldn't lift a single shingle on it!
Cause the way I feel, I'm strong enough to go to the club
Or the corner pub, and lift the whole liquor counter up
Cause I'm raising the bar
Been public enemy since you thought PE was gym, bytch
But I am tryin’ to find a way to get you alone,(a loan) car note!
I do acknowledge the corny punchlines and yes they are borderline papoose status but let's face it unfortunately that's what hip hop lyrics have become nowadays. Who can spit the most intelligent and clever punchline (ie daughterblouse) so to me it seems em Is trying to stay with the times and its sounding forced. I blame the young generation of fans for this (ie the type of fakkits who think joe budden is a better MC than inspectah deck)
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