Eminem and Sticky Fingaz' verse on "REMEMBER ME" appreciation thread

[the rhyme king]

When I go out, I'mma go out shooting
I don't mean when I die, I mean when I go out to the club, stupid
I'm tryna clean up my fukkin' image so I promised the fukkin' critics
I wouldn't say fukkin' for six minutes (Six minutes, Slim Shady, you're on)
My baby's mom, bytch made me an angry blonde
So I made me a song, killed her and put Hailie on
I may be wrong, I keep thinking these crazy thoughts
In my cranium, but I'm stuck with a crazy mom
(Is she really on as much dope as you say she's on)
Came home, and somebody musta broke in the back window
And stole two loaded machine guns and both of my trenchcoats
Sick, sick dreams of picnic scenes
Two kids, sixteen with M-16's and ten clips each
And them shyts reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets
fukk that, pbbt – you fakkits can vanish to volcanic ash
And reappear in hell with a can of gas and a match
Aftermath, Dre, grab the gat, show 'em where it's at
(What the fukk you staring at, nikka?)

this is like a text book of a what a multisyllable rhyme scheme is to me imo.

like if i had to show what a multisyllable rhyme scheme this would be the verse to study

 

[Sane]

Sticky clearly had the best verse.

 

[The War Report]

Classic and it fukking bangs

This is why eminem needs to say fukk every producer and work strictly with dre beats

Dre giving em stripped down beats gives him room to flow quick and aggressive without sounding how he does now. Em does not need to be on all these busy pseudo rock beats or these anthem beats . He tried to outdo the beat and it just ends up sounding annoying and convoluted


Pay attention to the music he does with dre produced beats. They are very stripped down and em can hear he doesn't need to yell and if he does it fits because the beats give his vocals space for it.

Nah, Em needs to get with the people who did The Sim Shady EP/LP

 

[Kid Coli]

Sticky is MAD talented.

He's also crazy as a coconut.

Great song though.

 

[FreshAIG]

No he didn't.

Sticky clearly had the best verse.

 

[Sane]

No he didn't.

 

[FreshAIG]

Not saying he didn't just disagreeing with the "easily" part. Him and Em was neck and neck

 

[Flav]

I made a video in my head for that song a few years ago.Everytime i hear that song my mental video plays with it.

 

[MidwestD]

the beginning part when they're quoting their famous lines

"[remember me] I JUST DON'T GIVE A FUKK
[remember me]yeah FUKK YOU TOO
[remember me]I LOW DOWN AND I'M SHIFTY
[remember me] i'm SHADAYYYYY "

something about "i'm low down and i'm shifty" always makes me laugh

we need a "Remember Me" part 2

 

[Flav]

The beginning is a old asylum and its raining and thundering outside

when RBX start rapping hes in a padded room bouncing off the walls wile hes rappin.

When hes done the camera zooms out of the room and goes slowly down the creepy hallway for the hook

then the camera goes into a room when Sticky start rapping wile on a table tied down getting a lethal injection.

when he stops rapping he dies then the camera leaves that room and does that hallway thing again till it goes to the last middle door where Em is


Em is on a Death row chair like Silkk the Shocker was on the It aint my fault video.

He starts rapping and the people thats watching through the glass feels discussed at what hes saying so they start to walk out one by one.By the end of the video where hes screaming "Remember Meeeee!" the last person walks out and it shows a arm pulling the switch and the screen blacks out and all you hear is electricity.

end of video

 

[Lucky Millionaire]

When I go out, I'mma go out shooting
I don't mean when I die, I mean when I go out to the club, stupid
I'm tryna clean up my fukkin' image so I promised the fukkin' critics
I wouldn't say fukkin' for six minutes (Six minutes, Slim Shady, you're on)
My baby's mom, bytch made me an angry blonde
So I made me a song, killed her and put Hailie on
I may be wrong, I keep thinking these crazy thoughts
In my cranium, but I'm stuck with a crazy mom
(Is she really on as much dope as you say she's on)
Came home, and somebody musta broke in the back window
And stole two loaded machine guns and both of my trenchcoats
Sick, sick dreams of picnic scenes
Two kids, sixteen with M-16's and ten clips each
And them shyts reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets
fukk that, pbbt – you fakkits can vanish to volcanic ash
And reappear in hell with a can of gas and a match
Aftermath, Dre, grab the gat, show 'em where it's at
(What the fukk you staring at, nikka?)

this is like a text book of a what a multisyllable rhyme scheme is to me imo.

like if i had to show what a multisyllable rhyme scheme this would be the verse to study

first time i heard that part of the verse

Sticky > Em > RBX

Classic song

 

[eerieBell]

lyrically em, but delivery and flow like Sticky definitely, it's so raw

and that's not even top 5 sticky verses

 

[drugxglory]

"Got nikkaz in my hood that'll do that shyt for a blunt or 2"
that line hard

Genius move by getting all them on a track.

 

[tonyclifton]

Nah, Em needs to get with the people who did The Sim Shady EP/LP

Yea I forgot to add this. I'm having a mind block but bass someone or something .

My point still stands. He needs stripped down beats to give his flow room

 

[Ed MOTHEREFFING G]

"Got nikkaz in my hood that'll do that shyt for a blunt or 2"
that line hard

Genius move by getting all them on a track.

yeah that one was gutta