Coli Fam, come tell me if I need to retire. This is my first project.

[observe]

I would take this criticism seriously if it were coming from anyone else...Too bad you're kind of a troll.

No ones trolling..you can't rap bro..simple as that

 

[Loyal2mySoil]

No ones trolling..you can't rap bro..simple as that

I agree with Observe.

The flow was the same throughout the whole album which made it boring and it also lacked any emotion like you're just reading off a paper trying to catch the beat. Beats are nice tho.

 

[D1renegade]

I agree with Observe.

The flow was the same throughout the whole album which made it boring and it also lacked any emotion like you're just reading off a paper trying to catch the beat. Beats are nice tho.

I can't agree with your point about my flow. It was adapted to every track and I thought there was plenty of variation. You may have a point about emotion. I can see how someone could feel that my voice is monotonous. That's kind of subjective though. Thanks for the listen and feedback.

Your post count tho...

Got me thinking that you might be an alt

 

[Hyperion]

I just peeped the track you had on Page 1. It's not bad, I've heard worse from people starting out. It does sound a bit monotone like you're reading off a page, so maybe try learning to add life into your voice or experiment around. If you are reading off a page, stop. Memorize your shyt cause when you have the lyrics in your head, you have much more control and freedom to deliver your words the way you want, rather than focusing on what you have in front of you. Some rappers can read off a page and it sounds great, but for growing sake, just memorize it. Your flow though sounds a bit... unnatural. Like you were kinda struggling a bit. But you're on beat, so it's not nitpick-worthy. The beat is good. I would say keep working on your delivery and see what works for you and what doesn't work, and find a place where you're comfortable.

 

[D1renegade]

I just peeped the track you had on Page 1. It's not bad, I've heard worse from people starting out. It does sound a bit monotone like you're reading off a page, so maybe try learning to add life into your voice or experiment around. If you are reading off a page, stop. Memorize your shyt cause when you have the lyrics in your head, you have much more control and freedom to deliver your words the way you want, rather than focusing on what you have in front of you. Some rappers can read off a page and it sounds great, but for growing sake, just memorize it. Your flow though sounds a bit... unnatural. Like you were kinda struggling a bit. But you're on beat, so it's not nitpick-worthy. The beat is good. I would say keep working on your delivery and see what works for you and what doesn't work, and find a place where you're comfortable.

So I wasn't reading off a page but I see where you're coming from. The first verse of "Coming Soon" can sound monotonous. I tried adding more emotion, but it sounded really forced. The vocal tone I used complimented the beat more than an emotional tone would've IMO. I think the real issue was the mixing effects I used. I should've sat on it more to find better effects to help bring my voice out. I don't think monotony is all bad though.. There are plenty of rappers who sound good at their one tone, their mix is just much better. I will say that I think my second verse sounds much better than the first tone wise. Wouldn't u agree?

Thanks for the listen and feedback.

 

[Loyal2mySoil]

So I wasn't reading off a page but I see where you're coming from. The first verse of "Coming Soon" can sound monotonous. I tried adding more emotion, but it sounded really forced. The vocal tone I used complimented the beat more than an emotional tone would've IMO. I think the real issue was the mixing effects I used. I should've sat on it more to find better effects to help bring my voice out. I don't think monotony is all bad though.. There are plenty of rappers who sound good at their one tone, their mix is just much better. I will say that I think my second verse sounds much better than the first tone wise. Wouldn't u agree?

Thanks for the listen and feedback.

Monotony isn't all bad (ex. Guru) but in this case your tone of voice isn't that commanding. Just my opinion though.

Regarding my post count: I'm not a true poster like some of yall that's all.