Coli Fam, come tell me if I need to retire. This is my first project.

[D1renegade]

I present my free ep, Bars For Daze. I need some honest feedback. Do I have any potential? Should I continue this craft. I think this is a solid first offering, but I need some outside ears to critique my work. I did everything on my own save for a few beats (S/O to @Zeu$) for the intro track).You'll have to excuse the mix, I'm very much an amateur in that department. I feel like I have some good bars (hence the title) and a solid flow. It's always weird hearing myself rap, so a lot of times I don't think I sound good. But other people think I sound legit. What say you Coli?

 

[clanarchy]

This is hot as hell to me. Keep it up. You nice with the lyrics and the beats. Real good listen overall, good to hear someone spitting over a Zeus track too. Dope

 

[D1renegade]

This is hot as hell to me. Keep it up. You nice with the lyrics and the beats. Real good listen overall, good to hear someone spitting over a Zeus track too. Dope

Thanks man. I really appreciate it

 

[Batter Up]

Good shyt, the beats and lyrics are both dope and you've got some originality which is always refreshing to hear. Keep it up

 

[D1renegade]

Good shyt, the beats and lyrics are both dope and you've got some originality which is always refreshing to hear. Keep it up

 

[Dog Based Gremlin]

I present my free ep, Bars For Daze. I need some honest feedback. Do I have any potential? Should I continue this craft. I think this is a solid first offering, but I need some outside ears to critique my work. I did everything on my own save for a few beats (S/O to @Zeu$) for the intro track).You'll have to excuse the mix, I'm very much an amateur in that department. I feel like I have some good bars (hence the title) and a solid flow. It's always weird hearing myself rap, so a lot of times I don't think I sound good. But other people think I sound legit. What say you Coli?

eh yo that beat! keep this shyt up, breh

very nice!

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

Overall I thought this was nice. You got some real dope fukking beats on here. I think your delivery could be tightened up a lil bit, but other than that you on your way. I think your producing is better than your spitting though, but that's just me and not meant as any type of shade.

My favorite track was Legendary. I think the beat and the way you were going in was perfect. I must have listened to that shyt 7x.

 

[D1renegade]

eh yo that beat! keep this shyt up, breh

very nice!

Thanks breh

 

[D1renegade]

Overall I thought this was nice. You got some real dope fukking beats on here. I think your delivery could be tightened up a lil bit, but other than that you on your way. I think your producing is better than your spitting though, but that's just me and not meant as any type of shade.

My favorite track was Legendary. I think the beat and the way you were going in was perfect. I must have listened to that shyt 7x.

That's a fair opinion. I prefer the producing aspect over the rapping. Thanks for the listen.

 

[D1renegade]

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Bump

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

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Bump

Aye breh, Lemme jump on that Legendary Qui Remix.

As soon as you upped the thread I started bumping that shyt again. That track is just too dope.

 

[D1renegade]

Aye breh, Lemme jump on that Legendary Qui Remix.

As soon as you upped the thread I started bumping that shyt again. That track is just too dope.

For sure man. I'll send you the track sometime this week. PM me your email

 

[observe]

Uh..you can't rap..maybe practice for 8 more years or so

 

[Roxx the King]

Props for the dbz sample on legendary alone

 

[D1renegade]

Uh..you can't rap..maybe practice for 8 more years or so

I would take this criticism seriously if it were coming from anyone else...Too bad you're kind of a troll.