coli breh been rapping 7 years and made a mixtape, am i ass brehs

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Not my style but I'm not mad at it. I liked Bandits and Colors, the beats were tough, and had good drums, so you had to rap mostly or all on beat.
 

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Respect on posting your music, fam.

I think "Call Me" is the best and standout joint. Good structure on that one.

The flow is a little choppy on a lot of the songs. But if you've only been rapping for 7 years, it'll take time to get more rhythmic and in the pocket of beats. I would definitely say to focus on that. Practice flows and catching the soulful part of emceeing. That's gonna take the music to the next level. The mix is solid and the content is too.

Once you spend more time working on the mechanics, you'll see a huge difference in the quality of your music. And that'll come with just making a lot more music. Write every single day and experiment with those flows, and it'll fall into place. Don’t let anybody tell you your music is ass. Ever. Keep creating and sharing, and you'll be on your way.

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