Aspring rapper looking 4 feedback PT.2

[kevlar kohleone]

Nice flow ... production is kinda boring

But ima production guy.

If the beat don't catch me I won't listen

But for your sake it's good breh ..on your end . . 8

What type beats u make?

 

[Bernie Madoff]

?

sounds generic.not going to happen...

 

[BelowTheMasonDixon]

tell me what u think

It sounds out dated. who is this suppose to appeal to? I like the hook, BUT it's in a singing out dated way that a better beat would be able to mask, as it is It sounds early 2002-2006 50 ish, Bars not bad but not great. it's def better tier, listen to this and tell me what you think music. as for professional level I can't quite give it that. Good attempt tho. keep trying.

Also as an unknown your intro well....you shouldn't have an intro. your music should be your intro. the focus should be totally on your music.

 

[Marco Andretti]

What type beats u make?

I don't make brats yet .

 

[kevlar kohleone]

It sounds out dated. who is this suppose to appeal to? I like the hook, BUT it's in a singing out dated way that a better beat would be able to mask, as it is It sounds early 2002-2006 50 ish, Bars not bad but not great. it's def better tier, listen to this and tell me what you think music. as for professional level I can't quite give it that. Good attempt tho. keep trying.

Also as an unknown your intro well....you shouldn't have an intro. your music should be your intro. the focus should be totally on your music.

Appreciate ur feedback

 

[kevlar kohleone]

sounds generic.not going to happen...

So what should I do differently 2 make myself stand out

 

[GrindMode]

this i really good tbh
really really good tbh
your image,clothes and friends look flabbynsick though
video look like a low budget 2004 video
but you got alot of talent

 

[ImmaGetJoeClarkArrested]

this i really good tbh
really really good tbh
your image,clothes and friends look flabbynsick though
video look like a low budget 2004 video
but you got alot of talent

Everything he said

 

[kevlar kohleone]

this i really good tbh
really really good tbh
your image,clothes and friends look flabbynsick though
video look like a low budget 2004 video
but you got alot of talent

lol good look

 

[Propaganda]

honestly that auto-tuned hook was terrible. and i don't think the beat was mixed right either.

but yeah, as far as just straight up rapping goes, i was feeling it. good shyt.

 

[kevlar kohleone]

thanks