this thread was hilarious... major throwback to the old forum days when cats used to battle all the time and people would give constructive feedback on top of the obligatory shyt talk.
C-styles was better than expected... and i cannot re-iterate this clearly enough........ i expected his shyt to be VERY trash. your shyt was 500% better than all the other clips i've seen of you.. but if i'm being honest your delivery/flow/lyrics are usually a 1/10 so this shyt was 5/10 ... 6/10 for the suprise factor for it actually being servicable.. flow was average (better than ur on track shyt) multis wre slightly above average...u tried some schemes.. "black card/new money/transparencyglass house" etc kinda aiight but didn't hit super hard.
^just my honest opinion bro, don't wanna come off as a major hater.. I respect people who are passionate about shyt and follow through.. u been pushing this music thing for years and there is incremental improvement i guess (i mean you aint never doin' that 2 remotes level production ever again etc). My feedback would be... maybe be more open to feedback and be flexible, keep trying different things.. ask your producers if you think you should spit differently.. try other shyt with your delivery..You have a decent ear for beats but you tend to rap outta time.. ask your producers for feedback and tell them to be honest.. i'm a musical cat - if i was producing your shyt i would makes ure you were actually on beat. Try different shyt with your voice.. alotta your tracks you sound the same delivery wise (and lets be real... alotta people out here aint saying ur shyt is dope.. so maybe try something different). Maybe look into chanelling your passion for music in other ways.. helping ur stepson out is a start but maybe get your bread up and try help manage other up and comers.. im sure you've made a lot of contacts over the years.. etc. u seem savvy in the way you promote yourself honestly that shyt could be a lane for u. Overall congrats - i thought this was going to be a viral-level disaster for your image.
with that being said...
A.V still got you beat pretty significantly.
Delivery and flow was more effective. Lyrically ctsyles prob had more multis was was slightly more technical but A.V just wrecked you with personals/harder hitting bars and sometimes not using mut;is and just focusing on delivery and getting a message acrosss wins out.
Notable bars.
GET YOU FIRED ON WHILE YOU WORKIN REMOTE! don demarco shyt.
the triple entendre flippin ya brick house bytch/real estate/whippin shyt was nice
Others have already noted the other crazy hittin' bars.
Bad feedback: none really, could tell u took this light but it is what it is.
cstyles: 5.5/10
a.v: 8.5/10
vote: a.v
Thanks. to both of yall for restorin' the feelin!
C-styles was better than expected... and i cannot re-iterate this clearly enough........ i expected his shyt to be VERY trash. your shyt was 500% better than all the other clips i've seen of you.. but if i'm being honest your delivery/flow/lyrics are usually a 1/10 so this shyt was 5/10 ... 6/10 for the suprise factor for it actually being servicable.. flow was average (better than ur on track shyt) multis wre slightly above average...u tried some schemes.. "black card/new money/transparencyglass house" etc kinda aiight but didn't hit super hard.
^just my honest opinion bro, don't wanna come off as a major hater.. I respect people who are passionate about shyt and follow through.. u been pushing this music thing for years and there is incremental improvement i guess (i mean you aint never doin' that 2 remotes level production ever again etc). My feedback would be... maybe be more open to feedback and be flexible, keep trying different things.. ask your producers if you think you should spit differently.. try other shyt with your delivery..You have a decent ear for beats but you tend to rap outta time.. ask your producers for feedback and tell them to be honest.. i'm a musical cat - if i was producing your shyt i would makes ure you were actually on beat. Try different shyt with your voice.. alotta your tracks you sound the same delivery wise (and lets be real... alotta people out here aint saying ur shyt is dope.. so maybe try something different). Maybe look into chanelling your passion for music in other ways.. helping ur stepson out is a start but maybe get your bread up and try help manage other up and comers.. im sure you've made a lot of contacts over the years.. etc. u seem savvy in the way you promote yourself honestly that shyt could be a lane for u. Overall congrats - i thought this was going to be a viral-level disaster for your image.
with that being said...
A.V still got you beat pretty significantly.
Delivery and flow was more effective. Lyrically ctsyles prob had more multis was was slightly more technical but A.V just wrecked you with personals/harder hitting bars and sometimes not using mut;is and just focusing on delivery and getting a message acrosss wins out.
Notable bars.
GET YOU FIRED ON WHILE YOU WORKIN REMOTE! don demarco shyt.
the triple entendre flippin ya brick house bytch/real estate/whippin shyt was nice
Others have already noted the other crazy hittin' bars.
Bad feedback: none really, could tell u took this light but it is what it is.
cstyles: 5.5/10
a.v: 8.5/10
vote: a.v
Thanks. to both of yall for restorin' the feelin!