Yo
@C-Styles
Not bad, you rep'd well
The underground bar and the time machine bar were dope, probably the standout lines in your verse imo. You didnt sound shook at all
Listening again while reading the lyrics added some more positive angles
Now I felt on some occasions you didnt let your verse breathe enough, and that muffled the bars a bit, some pauses/better spacing would have done you a great service here, especially on an acapella.
The Sean Taylor bar
@A.V.
Definitely the overall better product here
The following was
(the bold print caught me off guard and I damn near spit out my quality liquor
)
"Your step son p*ssy, and don't get it from his moms.
Choking him in my palms, til he calmin' down...
Like, "Look at me, lil' nikka...I'M the father now."
And even though his flow harder than C,
He still garbage. The apple don't fall too far from the tree.
p*ssy!...This ain't a battle, it's a light scrimmage.
You flex in tight linens...How you a Mexican, with White privilege?"
Delivery was great and executed well on the previous points i spoke on earlier about the spacing and etc.
I could tell it didnt take long for you to write this
(in good way, not a diss)
For those that haven't listened yet. I'd advise to listen to the track first prior to just reading the lyrics, two different modes there.
My vote goes to A.V easily. C-Styles didnt come off wack at all
, just went up against superior opposition on this one time affair. There's levels to this rap shyt.
Good shyt fellas