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I'm trying to kill some time here.

I'll reply with, at least, a three sentence review.

One track per poster, please. (for at least the first page, at least)

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Kill all the time you like breh.
are you the rapper, producer, or both? I liked the beat from the gate; that sh*t knock. However, once the rapping begins, there is too much compression or something that reduces the quality of the mix. Also, the vocals are too loud - let the beat breath, fam.

Re: the raps: they aight. I'm more of a beat dude, though so I defer all lyric critique.
 

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are you the rapper, producer, or both? I liked the beat from the gate; that sh*t knock. However, once the rapping begins, there is too much compression or something that reduces the quality of the mix. Also, the vocals are too loud - let the beat breath, fam.

Re: the raps: they aight. I'm more of a beat dude, though so I defer all lyric critique.

@DBR made the beat. I just spit, but thanks for the listen. :salute:
 

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made this this morning while wifey and the baby slept in

idk how I feel, most my beats the last week or two I stopped feelin after I relisten later :to:

I think your wifey and seed need to sleep in more often. This track is as cinematic journey of epic proportions. The changes in this beat are so damn mean. The only problem is that I listened to this beat on my iPad with no headphones and am afraid I'd like it even more if I bumped it on a real stereo. Kudos on this one.
 

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I think your wifey and seed need to sleep in more often. This track is as cinematic journey of epic proportions. The changes in this beat are so damn mean. The only problem is that I listened to this beat on my iPad with no headphones and am afraid I'd like it even more if I bumped it on a real stereo. Kudos on this one.
:salute: thanks man
 

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I like this

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download please
 

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From the gate I was feeling the sample. Then you matched the snare perfectly with that reverb to continue with that "dream state" feeling. I think the mix could use just a bit of help. The thing is, sometimes when you try to build a certain ambiance with reverbs and airy production, it can get a bit cluttered, blended. But, this works. Also feeling the vocals in the pre-chorus and hook. This is ill.
 
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