SUCCESS: I just posted the 1st episode to my show!!!!

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

I know this section is for film only.

Nonetheless, I wrote a show and plan on making a lot more episodes because I have a bigger plan.

After watching my first episode on YouTube, I would like a few opinions. I plan on waiting 48 hours before I write another episode or do anything.

Anybody who would like to volunteer their time, opinions, and critique; private message me, and I’ll send you the link to the video.

Your services will be greatly appreciated my Coli family.

 

[dangerranger]

You might have forgetting to add the link.

 

[DA_LURKA]

Just post the link...

 

[Yaboysix]

 

[valet]

Just in case yall miss this part

Anybody who would like to volunteer their time, opinions, and critique; private message me, and I’ll send you the link to the video.

 

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

You might have forgetting to add the link.

Just post the link...

Just in case yall miss this part

Anybody who would like to volunteer their time, opinions, and critique; private message me, and I’ll send you the link to the video.

I wasn't getting a response and was weary about attaching my face to my username.

Thanks for the response tho.

I plan on doing something different but it will be like my first episode just shorter and more "in-your-face comedy."

Anyway here's the video:


P.S. One thing I learned is that "Difficult takes a day, Impossible takes a week," and doing this is not impossible.

 

[Cladyclad]

I see ya boy. Out the gate u wearing a dress

I ain’t mad at ya

 

[DA_LURKA]

I wasn't getting a response and was weary about attaching my face to my username.

Thanks for the response tho.

I plan on doing something different but it will be like my first episode just shorter and more "in-your-face comedy."

Anyway here's the video:


P.S. One thing I learned is that "Difficult takes a day, Impossible takes a week," and doing this is not impossible.

First couple of seconds you in drag...

 

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

I see ya boy. Out the gate u wearing a dress

I ain’t mad at ya

I knew people were going to say that. My rebuttal is: IT IS NOT A DRESS. It is a skirt and top.

 

[Studious one]

This is a comedy skit? what is this supposed to be?

 

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

This is a comedy skit? what is this supposed to be?

I was hoping to make it like the Martin show for my generation. But I might go another route with it.

 

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

First couple of seconds you in drag...

I get it. My goal was to make it something funny with gems in it. My reasoning is white people have shows like Big Bang Theory, black people have shows like Empire.

In the first episode, I accidentally left out the view of the microscope and what I was looking at.

 

[Cladyclad]

The fukk is wrong with u lol

 

[ManfromNYCest.1900s]

The fukk is wrong with u lol

Zechariah 4:10
New Living Translation

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10 Do not despise these small beginnings, for the Lord rejoices to see the work begin, to see the plumb line in Zerubbabel’s hand.”
(The seven lamps[a] represent the eyes of the Lord that search all around the world.)


I could be doing worse...don't you think?

 

[valet]

I'd say the main critique is doing some research on filming. A couple of times, your head was cut off from the frame. I don't know the solution but that can a a turn off. Unless, you can make a humorous thing with a bad camera angle. But keep working at it. Finally, this didn't come off as a typical YT show. It reminded of a longer version of some of a skit. And of course at that skirt. You kinda look like the mama from House of Payne.