Raj Watts-Beat #3

[RajWatts]

feedback appreciated as always

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[Sincere Noble]

Im not really sure bruh. I dont think those hard ass drums go with the melody. Id probably try some 808s and different patterns and turn up the brass on it when it comes in and make it go for more than just tha 1 bar.

 

[Mr. Leonidas]

Yea this beat isnt good. Sounds very amateurish. Not only do I agree with everything that was said above, I think the drums need more depth, the instrumentation sounds cheap/cheesy. This sounds like a fruityloops beat, and im not talkin about a 9th Wonder/Boi1da fruityloops beat either