Please critique my homies music

[ProfessionallyTrill]

Yall my homie has a Masters in Philosophy and recently caught the "rapping bug" at age 30. So much that this dude has focused on rap only and just got kicked outta law school. He's got no car, no job and his mom is paying for this small studio apartment.

I'm a real friend that's concerned because every convo is about his mixtape instead bettering himself by using his degrees. I realize everyone has a dream but that dream should just be a hobby until you start seeing positive results.

Tell me what you think because I'm just not getting to him:

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[LauderdaleBoss]

The beat is on point.

Dude sounds like he just started rapping, like he hasn't found his flow/style yet. He got a rap voice. That's about the only redeeming thing I heard. He gotta put in some work on his lyrics and flow though.

Basically he don't sound nice enough at this point in time to quit all the other shyt you said he had going for himself. I hope this helps.

 

[ProfessionallyTrill]

Thank you breh

 

[G-Zeus]

sound is not even mastered.. tell him back to school.

 

[Mr. Leonidas]

sound is not even mastered.. tell him back to school.

Yea, what he said. How do you go from Philosophy to that kind of music?

 

[TEKBEATZ]

From law school to rapping

He is not bringing nothing new he sounds like thousand of the same rapper that are out now.. Tell him to go back to school and keep music as a hobby.

 

[Roxx the King]

he's 30? lil webbie wants his style back...

edit: beat is dope

 

[ProfessionallyTrill]

Agreed!