Official Critique My Comedy Thread

[mannyrs13]

I was going to make this about me with a poll but figured but why not open it to all to participate. So I'm just browsing pof yesterday and I see this girls profile and it says, "a priest, a rabbi, and a monkey walk into a bar....... I reply with this:

Not only does it continue her opening line but it leaves some suspense at the end.

Which if these options do you like:

"That was funny. You have potential to be a comedian."

"I chuckled. And atleast you were witty with your response."

"That was as unfunny as you are ugly. No wonder she didn't reply."

"Joke should've started with, @YaThreadFloppedB! Walked into a bar"

 

[Oran "Juice" Jones]

When I had my fake pof profile I wrote "your mother" as my only interest. This one chick thought it was hilaruous, because she thought she was talking to an extremely good looking man.

So it's not so much that funny men are attractive it's that attractive men are funny. fukk the jokes, work on improving your looks if you wanna succeed at online dating.