new song: 21 Grams

[Gentle Jones]

 

[Coherent]

Not a fan of the flow, but the content is good. The beat isn't bad either, but you should have rode it a bit better.

 

[Gentle Jones]

thanks for checking it out

 

[NamelessPimp]

Not a fan of the flow, but the content is good. The beat isn't bad either, but you should have rode it a bit better.

i agree with this...intro was a little long for me too. i was expecting when i first heard the beat for you to jump on spitting right away with a faster flow

 

[Gentle Jones]

thanks for checking it. to put this in context: the track is meant for an outro to my new project, there is plenty of fast rap on the album already, most important is the way the guitars end the album, this is a mixture of samples and live instruments.

 

[Gentle Jones]

i am really surprised this was a flop. back to the drawing board.