new beat, no sample, feedback desperately needed lol

[u mad son?]

man sometimes i make beats and i hear the beat so many times i think its dope, but ill hear it the next day and think its wack as fukk. please put me out of my misery and tell me if this beat sounds anything near to dope



to me the sax sounds wack and a few other sounds are not on point like they should be

realistic criticism welcomed very much

 

[Music Fiend]

Too many changes on the sax imo.

Change up those bells.

add a break in there with just the pas playing and bring the drums back.

I like it tho. Add some swing to that kick too bro.

 

[u mad son?]

pas?

thanks for the feedback g, i thought the bells sounded abit of too

 

[Music Fiend]

Pad* backroung soft ambience. Let the h0e ride and bring in those drums so it doesn't get too repetitive.