My first beats, need critiques.

[Camammal]

http://soundcloud.com/leslockheart/on-our-way-home

and my 2nd one thats on my homies page

http://soundcloud.com/dannywattz/bobby-james-diary

 

[Da Jungles]

These are both nice

The second one is super smooth

 

[Roxx the King]

these are good. you have a lot of potential in my humble opinion

 

[TEKBEATZ]

these are good. you have a lot of potential in my humble opinion

Roxx

 

[Camammal]

thanks yall, i uploaded these a while back and i plan on uploading some more since im back into it. Im limited to an ipad and a netbook so thats what ive been making beats on thus far. Green reps all around

 

[Roxx the King]

Roxx

they are good for his first beats, lol. im sure The Tunnel/Beat Club will help him grow and develop. the first one was experimental but i liked the sample chop and the second one sounds like a currensy beat

 

[Camammal]

Roxx

i do this in my spare time....just need honest opinions, i repped you anyways.

 

[TEKBEATZ]

lol no diss just happy to see Roxx in here, I haven't listen yet.

 

[True Weltch Media]

2ND one is not bad for your first set of beats, mine used to sound like shyt...

 

[AsAboveSoBelow]

I wasn't too crazy about the first one. It didn't grab me.

Second one is smooth as hell G.

 

[Interloper]

Yeah, that second beat is nice, especially for it being your second one.

 

[you're NOT "n!ggas"]

i'm feelin how you sped up/slowed down the beat on the 2nd one. what program did you use and how did you do that

 

[Rominati]

Word what software n hardware you fukkin with champ?

 

[Aje]

yo, "On Our Way Home" is kinda banging, duke. Not f'n bad for your second beat. Beginners luck means the universe is trying to tell you something...keep at it,, playbwoi.

 

[DaWe]

That "On Our Way Home" is my favorite I also listend to that Roberta Flack track on your Soundcloud page. Dope shyt.