obviously the mix is a complete mess but there's a definitely a decent beat in there if you flesh it out right. if that's really your 1st beat, then kudos. mine was way shyttier
my best advice is just keep making beats man...not loops but beats. whole tracks like this one. and save them too. you can always come back to your early shyt when you're more knowledgeable and experienced and re-work them into something more polished. cuz sometimes when you're just starting you have crazy dope ideas but don't execute them right...so when you get your hands on 'em when you actually know what you're doing it can be
but then other times (most times, actually lol) you'll re-visit your old shyt and be like