made a short yesterday fukkin wit my homie. looking for feedback

[O.G. Gumpy Johnson]

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[Khalil's_Black_Excellence]

First line of editing is to fix your damn thread title, ya bish.

 

[O.G. Gumpy Johnson]

First line of editing is to fix your damn thread title, ya bish.

whats wrong wit it?

 

[Neuromancer]

music and sounds are a little distracting. I can hear echos and the music just sound like noise.