..made a beat, tried singin and rappin over it..

[OGmittee]

i do not sing..never have but i was bored and have no shame so.....try to get past the singing if u can

was just chillin today trying to make a beat, then i thought of a little melody and finished up doin a real quick rap..its not some trap shyt or anything like that, kinda a smooth sample...was about to put "vocals" after the "rough" in song title lol

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/sdonns/5-13-ive-got-rough]5 13 Ive Got rough by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world[/ame]

im ready for some critiquing brehs

instrumental:

[ame="http://soundcloud.com/sdonns/5-13-ls-smp-ive-got-inst"]5 13 LS smp (Ive Got Inst.) by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds[/ame]

 

[Eoin]

beat is smooth, that singing is atrocious though.

 

[OGmittee]

beat is smooth, that singing is atrocious though.

lmao sorry man, thanks for the listen tho! if i had any singing talent i think that melody could work oh well

 

[Real N Quotes]

i do not sing..never have but i was bored and have no shame so.....try to get past the singing if u can

was just chillin today trying to make a beat, then i thought of a little melody and finished up doin a real quick rap..its not some trap shyt or anything like that, kinda a smooth sample...was about to put "vocals" after the "rough" in song title lol

5 13 Ive Got rough by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world

im ready for some critiquing brehs

instrumental:

5 13 LS smp (Ive Got Inst.) by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

Do you breh...autotune up your vocal, jazz up your delivery, and you will have a little something there

 

[OGmittee]

Do you breh...autotune up your vocal, jazz up your delivery, and you will have a little something there

apreciate that man..i think my boy has a auto tune thing at his house but hes in spain for a little while...maybe get my roger troutman type ish on when he gets back (i know roger used a voice box or whatever but )