Kirby beat

[Onigumo]

 

[D1renegade]

 

[nineteeneightysix]

(1) I don't like that stabbing sound that comes on at the 15 second mark...

(2) The beat would be more pleasing to my ears if you use breakbeats instead of those 808 type drums...The way you sampled (I am guessing the main melody is a sample) is PERFECT for a nice super compressed breakbeat...

A breakbeat will complement the crackling/grainy sound in the background, and add to the "dirtiness" of the sample...808's are too clean for the way you are using the sample...

The beat could be the soundtrack to a dark grimey tale about loss and despair...

That's how I am hearing it...