Joint I Produced And Rapped On

[Sharp]

More of an R&B/Hip Hop joint, but for those who like listening to smooth joints, check it out.

I produced, mixed, and arranged the track. I'm the first dude rapping

Honest feedback is always appreciated

[ame=http://youtu.be/T5crluNM_Yw]S.L. feat. Bamm & Neyasia- Still Addicted - YouTube[/ame]

 

[Aje]

not really a fan of R&B; that said, this is cool, breaugh. This reminds me of some Pharcyde, summertime sh*t. You sound a bit like Consequence. Not the biggest fan of the singing on the hook.

If I were to offer some sort of constructive criticism it'd be the following: first verse guy needs a bit more confidence and presence on the mic. Also, as stated above, the singing during the hook is a bit nervous but I'm not sure exactly what.

Good work, though. Keep at it.