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this is a simple piano beat that I´v made... nothing is sampled.. critique please brehs

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there will be more in the future.. I just want to see what you guys think of my productions since I respect a bunch of you
 

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I like Chill Out .. its definitely laid back , you on the keys on this one too ?????

Piano - Good start Needs some type of Crash symbol - hat and another instrument or synthlead with counter melody IMO
 

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I like Chill Out .. its definitely laid back , you on the keys on this one too ?????

Piano - Good start Needs some type of Crash symbol - hat and another instrument or synthlead with counter melody IMO

Yeah nothing is sampled..imma see what I can come up with with the synthlead might sound nice thx for the critique
 

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"Chill Out" - That's impressive that there aren't any samples. I thought it was a sample from the gate. It's a dope beat. Good work.

"Piano" - Reminds me of a Wu-Tang type joint. The mix seems a bit muddy, but that could be by design. This is cool, but could use a change up/hook/bridge section.
 

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"Chill Out" - That's impressive that there aren't any samples. I thought it was a sample from the gate. It's a dope beat. Good work.

"Piano" - Reminds me of a Wu-Tang type joint. The mix seems a bit muddy, but that could be by design. This is cool, but could use a change up/hook/bridge section.

Thx breh... yea I wanted the piano beat to sound that way like a homage to the beats in the early 90s.. but maybe I overdid it.. can hardly hear the hats and the snare is a lill too thick
 

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Thx breh... yea I wanted the piano beat to sound that way like a homage to the beats in the early 90s.. but maybe I overdid it.. can hardly hear the hats and the snare is a lill too thick
nah, fam, keep it that way. If it was intentionally then it's part of what you were going for - maintain your artist integrity. Dilla, Madlib, and Rza got tons of beats that are gritty on purpose.
 

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very impressive beats you most def have an upper hand since you dont sample and make boom bap style beats..[/quoU,
very impressive beats you most def have an upper hand since you dont sample and make boom bap style beats..
I sample also.. I just like playing the notes myself that way I can get itexactly the way Iv pictured it in my head
 

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another beat.. this one got a "newer" style and is more fitting for 2013-14 I can hear alot of rappers sound good on this one

 

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Very nice did you play the keys?


yeah breh.. my ultimate goal is to add my own instruments to samples to get more complete songs..

I listened to some of your beats and some of the are hot as fukk!!

beat number four hade me dreaming man really fukking nice breh
 
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