Im the 1st Verse..... [FEEDBACK]

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[Aje]

it was aight. I liked the dude's verse who went second better. His flow was tighter and more in the pocket. Keep at it.

 

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good look fam

 

[Tom]

2nd dude was better, mainly because u can tell he was a real thoro hood nikka, dude that went first(you) seemed more like a soft lightskinned rich nikka from the burbs who went to an Ivy League school, never experienced street life and learned about it from movies like Menace II society, no diss, just an observation, leave the hood shyt alone breh and just get ur nerd on, thats what I did, no shame in it.

hook was hot garbage


but garbage is popping nowadays (Boosie, Lil Phat, Webbie,Gucci etc) so u got a good chance to blow. I anticipate much success for you friend.

 

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lmao....im from Cleveland dog....u do the math. Feed back appreciated most def tho

 

[Tom]

Theres squares from every hood breh breh




be proud that ur not an intimidating black man, makes it easier to get a job, use ur softness to ur advantage and good

 

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lmao u got it breh.

Not here 2 tell my life story or seem like a goon...I asked bout the track/vid. good look tho

 

[Kaydigi]

Both verses were dope, but you should get someone to mix the track again. The way it is no the second verse stands out better than yours. He's using multi's and shyt so it makes his verse standout.

 

[Earnings]

Both verses were dope, but you should get someone to mix the track again. The way it is no the second verse stands out better than yours. He's using multi's and shyt so it makes his verse standout.

Good look on the feedback... This was really jus a filler track if u will...didnt even write tht verse... but my dude that did the video fcked wit it so we went wit it... And yea my mix game done got alot better since then but im still learnin too... My main thing is gettin feedback/a fanbase and seein what I need to improve.

Will post more tunes. Thanx again yall

 

[Tom Foolery]

Your vocals didn't come out clear. Also maybe do a bit more boosting in your lyrics to kinda standout.

 

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Boosting in the mix/recording process?

 

[Tom Foolery]

Sorry, Boasting in your lyrics. If you rap slow you want to make sure what you say sticks out.

 

[Tom]

rap less and focus on making beats for ur mans. He fire son

 

[Earnings]

rap less and focus on making beats for ur mans. He fire son

U soundin more like a hater with each post but thts a bet bro i got u.

 

[Earnings]

Sorry, Boasting in your lyrics. If you rap slow you want to make sure what you say sticks out.

Ohhh i see i see... Good shyt