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Some good sound in there, good drums. The second melody when it comes in, seems a little off to me. Other wise at a quick listen on my phone, seems pretty decent.
 

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Some good sound in there, good drums. The second melody when it comes in, seems a little off to me. Other wise at a quick listen on my phone, seems pretty decent.
i hope you give it a proper listen later ... i dont have monitors so i wanna know how the bass turned out...

thanx for listening :salute:
 

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The bass is very muffled/clipping, and i think a little overpowering. as well as the first melody. Not crisp. But thats going to be hard to accomplish without hearing through monitors.


I think with a GOOD mix, this could be a lot better.
 

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Can't give any worthwhile tips on the mix as that's not my strong point. It's a dope track though, as Myrical said the 2nd melody throws it off a bit but overall it's a good track.
 

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Can't give any worthwhile tips on the mix as that's not my strong point. It's a dope track though, as Myrical said the 2nd melody throws it off a bit but overall it's a good track.
Mixing really isn't my thing, either (obviously)... i tried watching some youtube vids but they might as welll be speaking greek :why:

but anywho...

thanx for listening! :salute:
 

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The bass is very muffled/clipping, and i think a little overpowering. as well as the first melody. Not crisp. But thats going to be hard to accomplish without hearing through monitors.


I think with a GOOD mix, this could be a lot better.
I use sennheiser hd-380 headphones for mixing

i like them alot, and they're a big step up from what i had before. but their low end is pretty much nonexistent :sadcam:
 

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Can't really give any good feedback since I'm on my phone right now but the beat is OK...not my taste but its not bad

I'll listen to it on the surround system when I get home
 
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